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issue 42, cover page of my original Manga Ryak-Lo (reads left to right)first page [link]
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I have been following your manga for sometime and here are some helpful tips for you so you can progress as an artist and author.
1. if i'm honest the story is well constructed and the dialogue flows incredibly well. the issue here is that the panels seem to be too bland, vary it up a bit by adding crazy angles and uniquely shaped panels.
2. you might want to consider using tones to make your backgrounds really come alive, their are several tutorials on youtube for that.
3. you have been using the same colouring style for a long time, and it fails to make the characters standout. piece of advice here work on trying to perfect your colouring, the art style it self is unique do thats good, but the colouring could definitely use some improvements. there are a number of tutorials to help you to colour via digital mediums.
4. Can't help but notice you have several chapters but not that much of a following, if you do indeed want to get popular you should consider advertising yourself more on the internet, a good place to start is to make a youtube account and make videos of you drawing process.
all in all you have created a great story and managed to create a unique style to your work, but you should definitely consider the things iv pointed out. i wish you good luck on your manga and hope that you do become successful.
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Hey, Kodo's smile is back! YES!
Thankyou, taresh, for not torturing him to hell by not letting him smile!
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I'm crying out, you better hear me,
I'm trapped in darkness, a candle lit in the dark.
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Everything in Ryak-Lo is so much "Adventure, Adventure, ADVENTURE",
that One runs Danger of forgetting how easy and peaceful Life can be. xD
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