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TearsofRegret117 — All My Fault [NSFW]
Published: 2003-11-28 02:07:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 63; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I visit you this gloomy day.
I fall to my knees in sorrow
My tears of regret kiss the cold dirt
In which you lay

How could you be so selfish to everyone who loved you, this way?

You ended your life
at the work of a knife
And now I have myself to blame
because of what I seldom show or say

It's all my fault.
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Comments: 4

hype7 [2004-02-02 05:14:56 +0000 UTC]

another really nice little poem.

again, topic is very emotional, you cover it well

-- james

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Holocast666 [2004-01-31 08:39:59 +0000 UTC]

it is a well wirtten poem, and yes... touchy subject ...
good wordings and generally a stable poem (with no referal to the subject)

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xxmusikjunkiexx [2004-01-31 03:01:34 +0000 UTC]

beautifully written. quite the tortured artist arent ya? AIM me, xxmusikjunkiexx

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ahojoshi [2004-01-31 03:01:12 +0000 UTC]

maybe instead of saying cold dirt, I'd say uncaring. i don't know why. I really like it, it really conveys the emotions that come along with suicide attempts.

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