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TF-Fan-error — Error Message - Are you lucky? (closed)
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My first error message. Will you be lucky ?Related content
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"you were disobedient by ripping the inside of my couch," i say seriously, "so i'm making sure you take you obedience lesson to heart," i say before picking up the phone and dialing the number of the obedience school, telling theme that your being disobedient again and signing you up again for the three day program.
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*I pee on the ground in fear* (can we rp the program?)
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(sure) "and your lucky i got stain proof carpets, or els i would've transferred you to there six day program," i said, meaning every word.
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*runs, but brakes a vase running past it*
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you stop in your tracks as you reach the end of your leash
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*I sit waiting to be beaten by the program people again*
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(was that a scene skip?)
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(Yep, to when we get here)
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(ok) "so, she's been disobedient lately?" the instructor said in a sargent like voice, "yessir i saw she tor the inside of the couch and broke a vase," i responded.
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*I'm quivering* *says in the same voice from before* p-please, I'll behave....
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i ignore you because again human nearby.
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*I cry as you leave* he has a whip!
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i telepath to you a few words "be glad it's not a light whip,"
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*my eyes glow purple and copy your telepathy "it is...... very thin at the end"*
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"well deal with it" i responded befor i cut off our telepathic connection, "so, you disobeyd your master even after our three day training program? i bet you were just begging to be back here, weren't you?" he stated coldly, pulling out his whip and cracking it at a nearby pop can, slicing it in two (the can, not the whip, though it'd be funny if that actually happened)
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*whimpers as I step back* no more blood!
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he smirks as he coils his whip, (scene skip) later in the training yard, the instructor is making you run through an obstacle course, cracking the whip at you if you disobey, fail to follow a command, or if you delay to follow a command.
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*blood is running down my leg*
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"KEEP GOING!" he yells at you not caring if you're injured or not.
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*I'm on the ground, crying*
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"GET UP YOU USLESS HUNK OF MEAT!" he yells cracking his whip at you.
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*yelps as blood runs down my side*
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"NOW GO!" he yelled again, cracking his whip at you. in the bushes nearby, to blood red glowing eyes were watching you, but neither you, nor the instructor, notice.
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*I slowly get up* SHUT UP!
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he doesn't understand you and commands you to finish the course cracking his whip at you.
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*finishes the course and clasps on the ground*
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"good, now DO IT AGAIN!" he says tha last part in a yell.
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*shivering and uses telepathy to tell him "no"*
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(we can only telepath to each other)
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(Darn) *I shake my head no*
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he tries to whip you again, but this time a metallic appears between you and the instructor and blocks the whip.
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the metalic figure turns to you, looking at you with blood red glowing eyes, before the flicker green and he turns back to the instructer.
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the metallic figure kinda reminded you of a hedgehog.
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Metal sonic........
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metal sonic proceeded to take theyou instructor's whip and tears it to shreds, you here a sound, similar to the chaos control from sonic adventure 2, coming from behind you
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i come over and pick you up, "i saw you were beat up last time, so this time i set metal to surveillance mode and had him follow you. he alerted me that you were being abused so i just had to intervene," i tell you with a serious look on my face.
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*I bark, but you can't understand me*....
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metal sonic catches up to us, and i hold up the gem, "chaos CONTROL!" i say yelling "control".
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*I eat the emerald* .......
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(no you don't, i'm holding it out of your reach) the gem glows brightly as our surroundings change to my back yard.
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*jumps down and walks inside, without the leash on*
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i pocket the gem and follow in after you.
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*I tracked blood on the floor and there's blood all over you arm*
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i spray your cut with water and wrap it in a bandage, and make metal sonic clean the floors.
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"sorry," i say, worried about your health.
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It's ok.... I'll never disobey again..... sir *closing my eyes at "sir"*
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