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snofs In reply to ??? [2011-04-23 01:35:42 +0000 UTC]

Mikey: ehhh good (fake smile) do not worry!
Donnie runs from raphs room and into his room and after a while he runs back ...
Donnie: Leo are you okay?

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 01:44:44 +0000 UTC]

leo starts to get off the couch and make his way towards raph's room but collapses on the floor....

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 01:48:34 +0000 UTC]

Mikey makes his girl screams DONNIEEEE!!!
Donnie comes out:
Donnie: ohhh no, carries him here and also get a mattress, he may be on fast now mikey!
Mikey runs away to get things ...
Leo can you hear me? Leo please answer!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 01:52:39 +0000 UTC]

leo coughs some more..." mikey...help...."

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 01:58:36 +0000 UTC]

Donnie: Leo It is me, Donnie please answer...whats happening??
Donnie's voice is muffled by tears

Mikey comes running with mattress and blanket
Donnie and Mikey put Leo on the mattress and covering him with a blanket.

Just then heard a crash from raphs bed!
Donnie rushing there
mikey stay with leo ...

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:01:24 +0000 UTC]

leo is really confused at this point...the room is spinning in his head and he's not sure which brother is talking to him...."...where am i...?"
leo coughs some more...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Mikey: it's me Leo, Mikey ... you are on the floor outside Raphael room.

to be honest is he not so good ...

Mikey Silence looks away and swallows several times ...

But Donnie is there with him you do not need to worry ...

Do you need something? something to drink maybe?

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:12:14 +0000 UTC]

leo blinks in confusion...."..did...did i hurt raph?..."

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Mikey:ehh ehh well ok maybe a little ...

Donnie comes out and supports Raph who as having difficulty standing up on his legs

Raph: LEO
Raph collapses on the floor in front of Mikey and Leo and is lying motionless

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:21:12 +0000 UTC]

leo stares at raph and has tears coming down his face..."i'm...srry..raph..." leo pukes again and coughs...his vision is now so burry he can hardly see...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:27:09 +0000 UTC]

Donnie lift Raphael from the floor and carry him back to bed ...

mikey takes care of Leo and make sure he is comfortable

Mikey: Leo not blame yourself for this ... there must be another explanation for why it went so wrong ... please do not cry ...

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:32:45 +0000 UTC]

leo: "i shouldnt....have hit him......i didnt mean to....maybe he was right...maybe i'm not a good leader....." *leo closes his eyes tight....his head pounds harder and he groans...."

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:41:20 +0000 UTC]

Mikey thinks, the situation is for him creepy ... Leo who is not himself and Raph who did not even manage to stand for one minute without collapsing.
He huddle at Leo's side and squeezes his hand:

Mikey: Hey Leo you know you're a good leader, you know that is just things that Raph says when he's grumpy. nothing you should worry about!
I think you're a good leader ...
Mikey try to smile a big smile

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:44:09 +0000 UTC]

leo: "...i shouldnt have punched him.....it was wrong...and now i dont know how he's even doing....i feel like i'm dying...." he grits his teeth at the pain in his head...*

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:48:32 +0000 UTC]

Mikey: I can go and check how he is doing, but you must promise that you stay here ...
you are not strong enough to walk alone ok?

Mikey gets up and leaving Leo alone ...

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 02:49:56 +0000 UTC]

leo whispers to himself.." i'm srry raph...."

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 02:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Donnie sits on a chair by rapha bed, he looks tired and pale
he lifts his head when he sees that mikey arrives.
Donnie: hey how is Leo?
Mikey: guilty feelings ... how are Raph?
Donnie shakes his head
do not know,
He wakes up every now and then but then he disappears ...
Mikey: Leo thinks it's his fault ...
Donnie: in some ways perhaps, but I do not think the hit was so hard it must be something else.

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 03:01:17 +0000 UTC]

leo starts blacking out...he can feel his heart pounding like a hammer in his chest....the light in the room grows dimmer....

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 16:53:53 +0000 UTC]

Mikey comes back and sees that Leo is being past out he rushes over and shakes her brother
Mikey: LEO WAKE UP!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 16:56:40 +0000 UTC]

he blinks and starts to come to it a little but is having trouble keeping his eyes open now...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:00:49 +0000 UTC]

Mikey: you are alive!! just rest i will get u aglas of water...

Donnie: i need water here to!!!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:03:42 +0000 UTC]

mikey's voice is blurred in leo's head and he lays there confused...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:08:12 +0000 UTC]

Mikey runs away after two glasses of water ...
Donnie come out and look for Leo to see if he does not get worse.
Donnie: Leo please you must tell me exactly how you feel and where you are in pain!

Donnie tries to keep his voice steady but it is broken and sobbing holder is heard!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:10:34 +0000 UTC]

leo blinks wearily...."my...head...."

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:13:41 +0000 UTC]

Donnie eyes looking anxiously at leo and takes out a flashlight and shines in Leo's eyes ...hmmmm

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:18:48 +0000 UTC]

leo moans and turns his face from the light...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:27:11 +0000 UTC]

Donnie:Hmmm pupil widens good ...
lay still

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:29:05 +0000 UTC]

leo leans over and vommits some more....

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Donnie: ehh I take it back there, it looked good ...

He wipes away the vomit and bathe Leo's forehead and begins to examine him closely to see if anything is broken or punctured.

Mikey! where's the water?

a harklning heard and the door opening is Raph

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:35:12 +0000 UTC]

leo's hands start to shake and he sweats...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:39:26 +0000 UTC]

Donnie: it hurts if I press this?
he pressed on Leo's chest and then across the stomach ...
Raph starts with an effort to get closer
with a broken voice, leo? Are ya oright?

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 17:42:39 +0000 UTC]

leo groans and pukes more when don pushes on his stomach...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 17:58:13 +0000 UTC]

Raph: hey do not hurt him donnie ...
Leo I'm so sorry
Raph fall together in a miserable pile at Leo's feet
his body shaking with sobs ...
Mikey comes with water and sits down next to Raph ...
Donnie looks scared and uncertain
hmmm you must be X-rayed he said and look at Leo

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 18:01:51 +0000 UTC]

leo doesnt seem to make out anything anyone is saying...their voices r blurry and the room continues to spin in his head...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 18:12:40 +0000 UTC]

Raph looks up and his eyes are red from crying ... WHAT HAVE I DONE!

Donnie tries to get Leo back on their feet to take him into a room to X-rayed him
Donnie: come on Leo! you can do it!!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 18:15:40 +0000 UTC]

blood drips from leo's mouth as they lift him and he's struggling to stay awake...everything is blurred and seems like a dream...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 18:34:46 +0000 UTC]

Raph is on his knees and his head bent to her chest. he sobbed.
Mikey gets up and gives Donnie a helping hand and gently leads off leo
Raph sits alone in the room

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 18:37:09 +0000 UTC]

leo stumbles and falls to the floor feeling uneasy and dizzy...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 18:42:50 +0000 UTC]

Donnie Leo helps gently back on his feet
Once inside his room, he and Mikey down leo on a gurney and Donnie for a strange device of Leo
Donnie: Just lie still this does not hurt ...

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 18:45:21 +0000 UTC]

leo gives no answer and coughs...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 18:51:13 +0000 UTC]

Donnie Leo investigate and find that Leos one lung has been punctured
- I have to operate you NOW.
you must trust me now
Donnie's eyes are troubled but fixed
he takes comand and start by putting a needle in Leo's hand
Mikey's eyes are large and full of tears
Mikey: will he survive?
Donnie: yes he will...
(thinking: he must)

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 18:54:36 +0000 UTC]

leo makes no attempt to fight and closes his eyes...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 18:57:57 +0000 UTC]

He gives Leo anesthesia and start to operate, mikey help as best he can,
so no one notice Raph who takes off half crawling towards an exit ...

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 19:17:15 +0000 UTC]

leo knocks out quickly under the drug...

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 19:20:49 +0000 UTC]

Donnie operating leo's lung, and then add a large bandage over his chest at him and then gives the medication for anesthesia and waiting to be leo should wake up!

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 19:37:31 +0000 UTC]

leo starts waking up in a little while....

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 20:57:20 +0000 UTC]

Mikey: i go and check on raph...
Donnie: leo hey Leo came back

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 23:08:55 +0000 UTC]

leo looks wearily up at don....

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snofs In reply to ThatTMNTchick [2011-04-23 23:11:03 +0000 UTC]

welkome back bro
donnie hugs leo gently

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ThatTMNTchick In reply to snofs [2011-04-23 23:19:29 +0000 UTC]

leo: "...i'm sooo tired...."

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