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Published: 2004-03-31 03:37:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 46; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Their kind words,fly right by me,
ment for someone else,
undeserving.
Their harsh looks and chants,
peirce right through me,
unprovoked.
Invitations, parties, friends,
unwilling.
Me as a whole,
never to be seen,
unbearable.
Put downs, harsh rumors,
unjustified.
Rejection, disete,
unwarrented.
Hated, loathed,
incomplete.
Left to suffer,
unwanted,
unloved.
Dissolving
into
darkness.
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Comments: 5
o did i??? i didn't even notice srry! thanx for telling me
though!
Luv ya
Lorali
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my one criticism? yd u put the mature content label on it?
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where's the flames? it's a good piece...i like the gradual fade the poem seems to imitate. nice work
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ok critisism is welcome but flames are not!!!!!! all flames
will be read, hisarically laughed at then ignored. keep that
in mind!
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