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TheJessofMess — Unbreakable - Chapter 1-32

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Published: 2020-07-13 11:02:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 12684; Favourites: 155; Downloads: 7
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Description AND THAT WRAPS UP THIS CHAPTER!  Unbreakable will return in AUGUST!! I'll be spending the rest of the month working through the next chapters, building buffers, and making adjustments.

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What a ride and experience putting this out! I want to thank everyone who has supported this comic.  I welcome any and all feedback/comments about this chapter so far! Please share, I love reading them and want to become better at writing.  I'm realizing that some things I have for chapter 2 probably should have been in chapter 1 XD

My intent with chap 1 and the prologue was try to "set the stage" on a few things:
1. Sans is not handling deja vus well in this AU and struggles with what is real and not even before Frisk showed up
2. Frisk is two-faced, manipulative, and enjoys the feeling of power and being in control of others.  They are trying to make a true pacifist run and acts a perfect angel in front of others but is impatient.
3. Frisk has the power and some tricks.
4. No one else has deja vu of Frisk killing in previous runs (no one reacts badly to Frisk)
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Comments: 133

Phuindrad In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 18:42:33 +0000 UTC]

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Phoenix-Prime-3000 [2020-07-13 15:34:03 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to Phoenix-Prime-3000 [2020-07-13 16:16:42 +0000 UTC]

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MillieDaAvocado In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 15:30:51 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to MillieDaAvocado [2020-07-13 16:15:49 +0000 UTC]

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Kirstenanlaur [2020-07-13 15:30:20 +0000 UTC]

Oooh... He's pissed

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TheJessofMess In reply to Kirstenanlaur [2020-07-13 16:15:18 +0000 UTC]

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MyNameTari In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 15:29:07 +0000 UTC]

Gaster?!?!?

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TheJessofMess In reply to MyNameTari [2020-07-13 16:14:54 +0000 UTC]

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Sunmist1wacher [2020-07-13 14:29:11 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to Sunmist1wacher [2020-07-13 14:45:20 +0000 UTC]

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Sunmist1wacher In reply to TheJessofMess [2020-07-13 14:47:56 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to Sunmist1wacher [2020-07-13 14:57:20 +0000 UTC]

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Sunmist1wacher In reply to Sunmist1wacher [2020-07-13 14:48:34 +0000 UTC]

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countlolipops In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 14:27:16 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to countlolipops [2020-07-13 14:44:04 +0000 UTC]

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countlolipops In reply to TheJessofMess [2020-07-13 14:45:34 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to countlolipops [2020-07-13 14:49:42 +0000 UTC]

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countlolipops In reply to TheJessofMess [2020-07-13 14:52:26 +0000 UTC]

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Silheedil In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 14:10:07 +0000 UTC]

and this is the story of how Sans went completely crazy

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TheJessofMess In reply to Silheedil [2020-07-13 14:38:04 +0000 UTC]

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Silheedil In reply to TheJessofMess [2020-07-13 14:47:16 +0000 UTC]

a minute of silence for the sanity of Sans.......
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Hey this scar is in the same place as Gaster's or it's just a coincidence?

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TheJessofMess In reply to Silheedil [2020-07-13 14:50:01 +0000 UTC]

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TheCodedBeast In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 12:32:16 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to TheCodedBeast [2020-07-13 13:10:39 +0000 UTC]

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Demo-Dragon In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 11:32:24 +0000 UTC]

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TheJessofMess In reply to Demo-Dragon [2020-07-13 11:45:21 +0000 UTC]

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mmangaboi In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 11:18:51 +0000 UTC]

I cant wait for chapter 2! I like the way you write Sans, I find it really interesting how Frisk acts, and I LOVE that you didn't make Papyrus dumb, I hate when people fo that. Overall, its a really great comic. So glad I found it! ( ^ω^ )

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TheJessofMess In reply to mmangaboi [2020-07-13 11:41:56 +0000 UTC]

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NezumeGamakaeru In reply to ??? [2020-07-13 11:05:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh no, he's developing a scratching habit. That is going to cause a lot of damage really quick.

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TheJessofMess In reply to NezumeGamakaeru [2020-07-13 11:39:02 +0000 UTC]

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DarthLangdon In reply to TheJessofMess [2020-08-28 02:34:39 +0000 UTC]

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