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Thundercracker417 — There, There Sweetie

Published: 2012-11-28 00:22:54 +0000 UTC; Views: 24569; Favourites: 390; Downloads: 200
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Description After seeing "One Bad Apple" and thought about it, I could not help but feel a bit sad about how Rarity and Applejack BOTH don't notice or do anything to help the CMC out...sure, it might detract from the message, I get that, I do, but seeing them do NOTHING ticked me off. So I decided to make this, an alternate take on the episode. But Applejack isn't off the hook yet...well, I think I'll be making a comic for her too, albeit going down a different route!

Oh, and because I know some people will mind how long this is, I must point out that I am accustomed to writing long and winded fanfictions, so this is something I am still growing accustomed to. On the other hand, one must also realize that this is a complete comic, not broken into parts like you might find elsewhere, so of course it is going to be longer than average. I personally think the length allowed me to show things that could otherwise be lost, such as the Rarity/Sweetie Belle hug. So please, don't hate on the length like some people did on my "This Day Aria...What?" [link] , and instead think about other, more constructive criticism! I don't mind that at all!

Soooo, anyways, I must thank all the amazing vector artists for letting me make this, for without their work this could not have come into being. All I did was the arranging of images and the writing of the script, they did all the nice art, so go check out the artists that I will be listing below! Who I must thank the most is for actually making three of the vectors used specifically for this and doing so in a most timely fashion! Without their help I would have been stuck and so they deserve a great deal of credit too!

Thanks also to and for this great show!

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Comments: 487

lionlover4536 [2012-12-08 17:57:45 +0000 UTC]

Isn't Tom that rock?

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Thundercracker417 In reply to lionlover4536 [2012-12-08 18:02:00 +0000 UTC]

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PonyMystic In reply to ??? [2012-12-06 18:50:19 +0000 UTC]

how sweet

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Thundercracker417 In reply to PonyMystic [2012-12-07 14:00:43 +0000 UTC]

I am glad that you enjoyed it!

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PonyMystic In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-11 17:57:31 +0000 UTC]

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Thundercracker417 In reply to PonyMystic [2012-12-11 18:50:07 +0000 UTC]

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PonyMystic In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-30 21:58:00 +0000 UTC]

lol

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draconichero18 In reply to ??? [2012-12-05 17:09:53 +0000 UTC]

Do I want to know what went on between Rarity, Babs and Tom?

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Thundercracker417 In reply to draconichero18 [2012-12-05 17:22:21 +0000 UTC]

It's for you, the reader, to decide actually. All that has to happen is Rarity confronting Babs, Tom being involved in some fashion, and Babs being scared witless but other than that it is really your choice

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draconichero18 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-05 19:06:18 +0000 UTC]

That's what I'd thought you'd say and that kind of scares me considering the thoughts that went through my mind

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Thundercracker417 In reply to draconichero18 [2012-12-07 01:53:30 +0000 UTC]

Well, other than feeling ashamed of yourself, you should find some comfort in that some other people had the same thoughts that you did!

Wait...probably shouldn't have put the laughing face for that...

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draconichero18 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 02:38:46 +0000 UTC]

Oh nothing sexual just...how should I put this?
Let's just say I'm surprised you didn't draw Babs with any bruises or injuries in the last panel

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Thundercracker417 In reply to draconichero18 [2012-12-07 03:16:44 +0000 UTC]

Well, I don't think there are any vectors of Babs with bruises yet...and I don't even think a bruise would show up on a pony what with their coat and all.

What, you thought something like this would happen?

Are you the one who has been making poor Sweetie Belle cry?

Yeah, whats it to you?

(kicks in the face) Take that you ruffian!

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draconichero18 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 03:25:27 +0000 UTC]

Good point.

Something along those lines, though mentioning Tom the rock brought up the idea of being held down against said rock with Rarity yells in her ear or ever infamous Ass Shove
Though how something that big would...yeah I'm just going to stop before I dig myself deeper, though I fear it's too late >_<

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Luigicat11 In reply to ??? [2012-12-05 03:33:52 +0000 UTC]

LOOK OUT! HERE COMES TOM!

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Luigicat11 [2012-12-05 04:02:51 +0000 UTC]

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Luigicat11 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-05 05:15:13 +0000 UTC]

LOL, eeyup

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Luigicat11 [2012-12-07 01:50:24 +0000 UTC]

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Luigicat11 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 02:02:18 +0000 UTC]

Well, there is one factor you have forgotten: nopony can win against a foal (unless they're foals themselves), they could have some law-related trouble. (if it's a fight you're talking about anyway...)



...I'm probably just overanalyzing things...

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Luigicat11 [2012-12-07 02:06:56 +0000 UTC]

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Luigicat11 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 02:08:19 +0000 UTC]

...deja vu

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Luigicat11 [2012-12-07 02:13:12 +0000 UTC]

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Luigicat11 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 05:42:36 +0000 UTC]

okay then...

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gonzo22 In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 05:44:07 +0000 UTC]

also like how you put babs in the mirror on panel 3

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-04 20:00:38 +0000 UTC]

WHy thank yoU! You're the first person who has mentioned that detail

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gonzo22 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-04 20:26:37 +0000 UTC]

i'm just really glad that unlike in the show babs didnt get away scott free

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-04 20:30:10 +0000 UTC]

I know, right?

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gonzo22 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-07 02:13:48 +0000 UTC]

i knew babs went to far in the bulling when she Stole the cmc clubhouse and took it for herself,tiara and spoon

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-07 02:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Yup. And poor Sweetie even cried!

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gonzo22 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-04 21:07:18 +0000 UTC]

this is kinda i feel like how in boast buster trixie is the one who gets the blame and hated for the ursa minor attack, but it was really snips and snails who brought it there yet the town doesnt seem to hate them for it

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-04 21:09:37 +0000 UTC]

Again, I agree fully...Trixie was just boasting and humiliating people who were heckling here. Snips and Snails were the ones who nearly got the town destroyed and who should have been blamed, but then again no pony really blamed Trixie that much, she just left running due to embarrassment. Still, Snips and Snails should have had to repair everything destroyed and done some community service or something rather than just getting mustaches...

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gonzo22 In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-05 20:49:12 +0000 UTC]

as long as i've been a fan of this series i have yet to see a fanfic or fancomic where snips and snails get punished for their actions

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-07 01:47:56 +0000 UTC]

Same here in fact...might be something I touch upon at a later date!

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gonzo22 In reply to ??? [2012-12-04 05:43:19 +0000 UTC]

cant wait to see you make applejack give tiara and spoon what they deserve

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Thundercracker417 In reply to gonzo22 [2012-12-04 20:01:36 +0000 UTC]

Nor can I! I'm working on the script for it currently and my friend Manangatanga is working on the art, so hopefully we can get it out within the next couple weeks.

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TaranNeedles In reply to ??? [2012-12-02 21:03:52 +0000 UTC]

the best sister ever

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Thundercracker417 In reply to TaranNeedles [2012-12-03 02:32:54 +0000 UTC]

And AJ's still going to get her turn at being a good sister!

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TaranNeedles In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 13:39:19 +0000 UTC]

Yey for the big sisters

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Thundercracker417 In reply to TaranNeedles [2012-12-03 14:47:45 +0000 UTC]

Good family is a good thing to have

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TaranNeedles In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 15:09:45 +0000 UTC]

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Thundercracker417 In reply to TaranNeedles [2012-12-03 17:36:37 +0000 UTC]

If anypony touches mah Bloom ah'll give em the ol' one-two.

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Renee-Niels In reply to ??? [2012-12-02 04:37:42 +0000 UTC]

You do NOT mess around with Rarity's little sister~ =w=

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Renee-Niels [2012-12-03 02:32:02 +0000 UTC]

And Applejack is going to be getting her turn next!

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Renee-Niels In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 02:32:49 +0000 UTC]

Attagirl, AJ! >8D


... Why must protective older brothers and sisters be so badass? :3

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Renee-Niels [2012-12-03 02:46:08 +0000 UTC]

No-one mess's with Applejack's family, especially not her Bloom. I mean, after all, you can't really mess with Big Mac, and nopony would mess with Granny Smith, so all the protectiveness is focused on Apple Bloom. So badass rating is 3X more than a regular amount in this particular case.

I am working on the script for the comic now and my friend and colleague is working on the vectors involved. Hopefully we can release it in the next couple weeks, so if you wouldn't mind watching me it should be out (relatively) shortly!

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Renee-Niels In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 02:47:38 +0000 UTC]

XD Awesomeness~


... Yeah, AJ and Mac... You just don't buck with those two. =w='

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Renee-Niels [2012-12-03 02:57:39 +0000 UTC]

Eeyuuup

Eeyup. Nopony messes with my Bloom.

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Renee-Niels In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 02:59:00 +0000 UTC]

Hellz yeah. =w=

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Thundercracker417 In reply to Renee-Niels [2012-12-03 03:05:41 +0000 UTC]

If they DO mess with my Bloom, ah'll give em em a good one-two

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Renee-Niels In reply to Thundercracker417 [2012-12-03 03:09:30 +0000 UTC]

Attafilly! ^7^ *high-hoof*

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