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Thunderhawk03 — Color Doesn't mean anything
Published: 2012-11-30 02:47:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 52079; Favourites: 1052; Downloads: 246
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First a simple image, after that a picture, and now I tried to make a comics. Still figuring out, how to make it easier, and faster, but I think im getting use to this GIMP. Much more easier after some practice.Comics: It's nothing really special. Ones I think about, how Shining Armor, and Vinyl look alike. I mean: Mostly the same hair color, main mane color (blue), and the race (both are unicorn). It was a great opportunity to try to draw my OCpony, and try out some poses. I thought drawing a pony in front of is much easier... well not from me, still need practice.
So I thought, that if somepony, not from Ponyville came from a visit, he could think, that they are siblings. Even if we know: Color truly doesn't mean anything. A lot of pony have a very variant color, even in the family.
The Unknown pony: Well we could say, it's my BETA version of my OC Pony. I just call him: Leon the Unknown. Strange name for a Pony ha? Well he has a real name, but I don't want to tell it until if decide to try to make a comics series about him, and the mane 6. I have a very-very big story for him, so until if I will decide to make it, it will stay Unknown, caus, if I would tell, then I will take the point out of a joke. His Cutie mark is a small shield, but this is a BETA version to, I just needed something on him.
I know its nothing big, but I hope, you will enjoy it
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Yeah if I hadn't known that Twilight and Shining were siblings I would have thought Shining and Vinyl were siblings myself xD
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LOL at Vinyl's expression
But yeah, all due respect to Twilight but it makes all the sense in the world that Shining Armor and Vinyl should be related.
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I think...I think I just busted a gut laughing too hard...
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I can actualy see that happening.
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The "classic" accident when two little fillies were born at the city hospital at the same day....^^"
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How crazy would that be if Twilight Sparkle's foal-sitter was a DJ?
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Me and my DA friend ~darkoverlords have noticed the similarity of their manes since the day the epic 2-part Season 2 finale, A Canterlot Wedding, premiered on the Hub.
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There's a couple misplaced comma in the first panel, but otherwise, AWESOME!
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How did I never see this? They really do look like siblings!
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Oh that is too awesome! I never noticed that before. Nice job
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I assume English isn't your first language...I'll help you out with the errors.
Panel 1: Shining: I'm so happy that you're finally here! Leon: I'm the one who is happy, Shining! I'm very curious about meeting your family! Especially your sister; you always talk about her! Panel 2: Leon: Oh, I think I see your sister! I'm going to introduce myself!
Panel 5: Leon: ...Shining is always talking about you..
Panel 6: Sorry to interrupt you, but she isn't my sister.
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btw, i liked it xD thought it was funny
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Thnx, you are right, english wasn't my first language. And with a new law in our country, we can't learn english, as our first language, because after learning english, it's harder to learn other language, because english is much more easier, then others. (at least that's what the government think).
But thank you for the info, I already corrected the errors, thank you again. But what was the error in panel 6? You wrote down the same, what's in the comics. Or at least, I didn't find any different.
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you don't need a comma after "sorry"
and that sounds stupid that they made a law like that :/
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Shining: These aren't even my real coat and mane color! They're died just like the rest of the Royal Guard.
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I do see the resemblance... hehe nicely done.
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This is a good comic but it is full of typos and grammatical errors. It might be good for you to have a proof reader to look over your comics to check your grammar before posting. If you want to do something like that let me know.
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The weird part is, that I did it, and still 
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Alrighty, here goes:
First panel
Shining Armor says:
He should say it like this: 
Eliminate the comma, and use of "you are" or "you're"
Leon says:
Leon should say it like this:
Panel 2:
Leon says:
Correct way of saying it:
In this statement the second sentence starts with "I will" or conjugated to "I'll" go. When talking about a verb there are three tenses that you can use: Past, present, future. In this instance he is saying that he "will" introduce himself in the near future as soon as he walks over to her.
Panel 6:
Leon:
Correct way:
Because of his use of the word "always", Leon is essentially saying that Shining is talking about Twilight continually without stopping, so the present tense of the verb is used. Otherwise he would use the past tense of the word like this:
Those are the things I noticed are incorrect. I hope this helps you! If you need anything else proof-read, let me know.
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Ah, shame on me, making such an amateur mistake like the who-how. I better go, and take some english lesson before trying to make other "long-conversation" comics. I focused to much on the drawing. Thank you for the info, I corrected the mistakes.
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Don't worry about it. Like I said, if you need someone to read over anything before you post it let me know. I can look over your work and tell you if I see anything that needs to be changed before you post it. All professional artist and comic writers have proof readers.
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Thank you, I will remember
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I see I wasn't the only one who noticed XD
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You are not the only one.
I have noticed the similarity of Shining's and Vinyl's manes since the day "A Canterlot Wedding" episode aired on the Hub.
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I noticed a little bit afterwards
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They really do look similar!
About your pony, perhaps you should, pick other colors? Those you've used are pretty mainstream and not really true to the show. Red eyes aren't as cool as you may think. Instead, take amber eyes! A beautiful color and more natural.
Such a huge contrast in mane/tail isn't really believable, so instead of black and orange, perhaps blonde with another lighter orange streak, or dark brown with another lighter brown streak? So the Orange doesn't POP as much as it does, because it kind of gives it a Halloween feel.
Not criticising, I love this comic, just a few tips so you can avoid any haters c:
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Don't worry about it, I love, how they say, the "?constructing aspect criticism?" (correct me, if it's wrong, don't know how to say it
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THANK YOU SOMEBODY ELSE NOTICED! Although I did see one person make the Shock meme of Vynal seeing Shineing and going FATHER? lol
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Dude, considering the fact the ponies come in the skittles variety that shoot lasers from their horns in the first place, I think the whole genetics thing is kinda moot.
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