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Published: 2008-01-27 18:37:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 70692; Favourites: 5838; Downloads: 0
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I colored inthe line art from my scraps.>> [link]tool: SAI and PS7
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Awesome!! For some reason, I am reminded of Fate/Stay Night... XDD
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wow....it makes me scared,...it very nicely done..* oh no i have no where to go! mommy>.<
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The dress is absolutly beautiful <3
I love your pictures,
they're showing so much feelings *___*
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very nice, but im gonna try anyway....GAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! *didn't even take 2 steps back.....*
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Excellent!
Wonder what happens if I go out the entrance?
Perhaps another deadly beauty who will tell me I can never leave.. D4mn! That means I miss lunch..
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I won't leave! I like this kinda stuff ^^ only if I get to help though
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You can see how much work you put into this. But at the same time, the image has some flaws to it.
For one thing, the broken glass in the doors is very unconvincing. It looks more like torn white paper than broken glass, because it's flat white, and the break patterns of the glass are not angular. Study reference photos of broken windows and try to capture the transparency and brilliance of reflective glass.
While you've put a lot of attention into little details like the nails in the wood siding, there are some details missing as well. For example, the door that's ajar has no hinges--if it had been torn off the frame, there would be broken hinges either on the door or on the doorpost.
There are some problems with the atmospheric lighting. The light source is really unclear. The figure's shadow is cast to the left, implying that the light source is from the room behind her. However, if that were the case, there would be shadows cast from the walls and the broken door. There's no clear source of light; everything seems to be glowing blank white and shadows seem to be put in at random.
You rendered the figure itself with a lot of attention to detail and precision, which is good. However, her stance is awkward--her upper body is thrust out in an overbalancing kind of way, and the viewer isn't convinced that her legs are fully supporting her due to the awkwardness of that. Her hips are also pretty unclear; we can't see the figure under her poofy skirt, but the lines of how her legs are placed put her hips at a really strange tilt. The way that her feet are placed, too, seems unstable.
It's also confusing that there seems to be wind indoors blowing her hair and clothes, but that the paper on the floor doesn't seem to be blowing around. This kind of inconsistency jars the eye. And I like the dynamic smashing of her weapon into the floor, but it doesn't make a lot of sense with her very static and staid pose.
Additionally, the blue glow around her figure helps her stand out from the background a little, but it doesn't make a lot of sense. If she is actually glowing blue, then the environment--the floor, walls, her skin and hair, etc--would reflect that blue color in their highlights. As it is, it just seems like a randomly placed glow that doesn't add to the image, but makes it more unclear.
I think a lot of depth could be added to the background with more attention to the shadows behind the broken siding and the broken windows. Presumably these openings look into a very deep space, so why not put in darker and more dynamic shadows? It would really help the background pop.
Hope this critique was helpful.
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I like how the "exit" sign means literally, "extremely mouth." XD
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..... wouldn't want to break her heart!.....nice job!......love the goory presence of it ^____^
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i love and just a bite fear it but it great all the same.
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I like how you made the background so realistic especially the broken wood
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This reminds me of a picture I saw once of Alice from Alice in wonderland, smiling and wielding a huge bloody knife while wearing a blood covered apron.
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Thats pretty amazing. The blood looks so real, and the chicks outfit is drop- dead amazing aswell. I would kill to have the outfit.
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kyaaaaaaaaaaa! that's sooo cute! the rose adds a nice touch!
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This looks awesome!!
I like the shading...The perspective...even the cute character with a deadly mace as a weapon xD.
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Oh JEEZ! Would u look at that mess. Whose goin 2 clean it up.
NICE!
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Very pretty and cool, but also scary. o.o Don't want to get on her bad side. 
I like the weapon you gave her (I can't for the life of me think of what it's called) and her outfit. It's like an oxymoron. ;D Another great picture~!
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that would be a very bloodied Flail she's holding. I think that she is gona be angrier in a few moment when that door falls over and hit her
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cute and deadly....odd combination but it works! : P
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that's awesome~!
and somehow cute too xp
i really looove the dress
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haha i love the way she looks so innocent and pretty, especially portrayed by the face, but she's holding a wacking great weapon and all the blood splatters look really amazing
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._. Nice...girl... put the heavily bloodied weapon down now...
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Lol, I love cute girls with bloodcovered weapons for some reason ^_^
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Snap that's awesome!
Oh no! She's blocking the exit! D: lol
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this is the coolest picture i have ever seen!!!
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sure hate to be the guy shes after lol
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she looks so innocent but so evil.
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I looooove her dress! She's cute, but scary at the same time!
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She is a pretty model with a glowing aura
I don't know what pill has she taken, but she should not use it, it makes her very wicked... and she smiles about killing! 
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Run! *gets slaughtered* Darn it...
Nice pic, though I tend to think she looks too innocent..but that's just me. I like the way you did the blood, it looks realistic...and that makes me sound like a psycho, lol. X_X
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