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Published: 2006-12-02 07:31:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 3212; Favourites: 139; Downloads: 64
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Hey, hey...^^ this is actually my first Inking in DA!!...excluding the OC Showdown of course...but since I'm using an ordinary 15-cents gel pen...the inking is rather pathetic...this is a request from (umm...someone...)
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Anyway...it's worthed it...^^
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Completely grateful!! ^^
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The inking is horrid? Poo, I say.
I like the whole thing, to be honest. But since it says you prefer advanced critique, I'll try to give some...though I could honestly never make anything this nice.
Isn't the jewel on her head slightly larger and more round on the edges? Also, I don't believe ears are that low on people's heads. It just seems strange to have them growing out of her jawbone.
The random creases in her cloak would be nice if inked and the piece was colored, but just inking seems to make it stand out more than it should. Maybe ink it a little lighter?
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..Well...as I've said the inking is not too good and I can see all the problem you said...the main issue is my inking apparatus.."PEN"...^^ is so freaking thick I do Raven cheekline in only one stroke, and it's still look BOLD.....and I understand the ear...it just that I've inked it in a wrong position and well, have to compromise...
Thanks anyway!!
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