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Published: 2020-04-05 14:57:45 +0000 UTC; Views: 769; Favourites: 51; Downloads: 0
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Well, here is an idea I’m not sure will be a good one, like many other ideas yet again. Here is a guy I thought of for a while that has a mechanical jaw, Talizon. After some research, I found a few more guys with mechanical jaws that looked too much like the idea I wanted to go with, so I decided for him to have mechanical teeth, unless that’s an even dumber idea. What do you guys think? Also tell me if this guy looks or sounds like something you’ve seen before because I’m sure he will.Age: 38
Affiliation: Salem’s Inner Circle
Status: Active
Height: 215 cm
Weapons: 2 katana blades, a small flamethrower, and a handgun.
Personality: Talizon always enjoys the excitement of a good fight and always desires to challenge the strongest opponent he can. Once he kills a strong hunter or huntress, he takes something from them as a trophy. He also speaks in really strange sentences that feel like he’s saying something different from what he really means.
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RWBY belongs to Monty Oum and Rooster Teeth
Talizon belongs to me, TitanXecutor
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I like the design and the colours, this character does have some potential
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You’re welcome
But if I’m being critical I think your character is missing something, like maybe some piercings, some tattoos or scarring since he likes to fight the strongest
But it’s still good
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Yeah I figured he would have something like that, but I feel like I made too many people with scars, but maybe I can do tattoos and/or piercings next time I draw him
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Yeah that’s a good idea
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Very nice design! Though I feel like the mechanical jaw can use a little work. My suggestion is Raiden from the Metal Gear Franchise In my opinion, the way the model of his jaw looks is very realistic. Just a suggestion.
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Thanks a lot. I decided it’s not a mechanical jaw but more like mechanical teeth, and it shows if he opens his mouth. And the problem with Raiden is that I don’t want it to feel too much like something else. But thanks again
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Okay, that makes sense. Thanks for the correction!
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YOu're welcome and thanks for understanding
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