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Published: 2013-05-25 02:20:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 2374; Favourites: 118; Downloads: 0
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ALRIGHT I GOT IT. This is how things'll go down:Arc 1 gets a complete overhaul, there will also be a bonus chapter afterward involving Nifelheim. It'll be considerably shorter than the first run, and while the 2nd arc has weak spots, the bulk of the problem is arc 1. Arc 2 is unchanged, Arc 1 gets a redo. YES. And since it's shorter I can blaze through it nyyyeeeroooom.
THIS ALSO MEANS I GET TO REDESIGN THOSE AWFUL OVERFIEND OUTFITS. Fashionista over here WATCH OUT. Carval's coat is over-sized because it originally belonged to Volaster D'AAAAAWWW. His hands will likely be lost whenever his arms are down.
Figured I'd start with the unruly pair of half-siblings!
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Just Arc 1, but it's a doozy either way! Thank you!
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Oh god Carval, why are you creeping me out so much right now?!
But seriously, it is nice to know that you have it all planned out now. Gives a clearer idea of what to expect, somewhat.
And those outfits are great, gives them a little more personality.
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IT'S HIS JOOOOB~
Yaryar, been doing lots of work! Thank you!
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Ame's suit is sexy as hell. o_o I await the pages to come with much anticipation.
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I REMEMBER FINISHING THIS AND THINKING "This is totally something Cruxia'd wear", haw!
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i like the redo, debating whether or not i fully like the changes to ames costume, but it does look kinna cool
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i guess. i sorta like the more covering suit, but the coat is cool too.
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Huh, thought Carval was wearing a skirt there from the thumbnail... I thought the existing overfiend outfits were alright, but these new ones do look pretty snazzy.
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Yar, old ones too boring imo.
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Will any demon ever grow a beard?
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I've debated Goristro, but only due to his origins.
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Hoooooly eff, these are fantastic! Ame is absolutely gorgeous <3 And the over-sized outfit fits Carval so well.
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You know what I like more after designing?
REDESIGNS AWE YEAH. I found that redesigning my characters is, well, fun, yo.
And speaking of, hot dawmn, Ame looks awesome in that outfit.
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Aye, at the very least, NEW OUTFITS~ Thanks!
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Carval, when will you start to wear these badass black pants instead of these "britches"? with black kamina glasses?
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Cause he's more concerned with being comfy than fashionable!
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Then again, when i says "britches", it almost sounds like it without a R. I'm bit concerned about that, i dont know why. Hope i dont offends you. Anyway, He'll regret it when he still wears it in winter.
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Not concerned, no worries. :U
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Kinda makes him look like he's wearing a dress. o.O
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Pretty nice outfit on Ame.
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Okay, y'know what?
Jus...
Just do the whole thing over.
Do the WHOLE THING OVER. FROM SCRATCH. START RIGHT NOW
I will see you in a YEAR
And from THAT POINT ON...YOU DO THE WHOLE THING OVER
XD OKAY okokokok I can appreciate you wishing to bump up quality in the overall scheme of thing for heartcore. But you keep this up, I fear you're not gonna be satisfied with several other things you did and wish to edit them.
And you'll like them when you do! But guess what happens in time? You'll not like them again! And you'll make them better! And you'll not like them! Rinse and repeat to the GRAVE!
I dunno, I guess I just don't want heartcore the CURRENT to suffer in stasis for the crimes of heartcore the PAST, yanno? I mean, if it were possible to fix all our mistakes, how will we have learned anything?
Outside that, I AM digging the designs. Can't really imagine Ame in pants these days unless they're hugging up against her flesh. I'd liken Carval's attire to a certain crossover game, but if you didn't kill me for Fetishland, you'd certainly kill me for THAT XD
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NONO, THAT'S NOT HOW IT'LL GO I SWEARS IT.
Half the reason is art, the other half is story! I intend to do a print edition once it's all fixed up, so it will be CEMENTED~
Yar, these are some pretty awful sins though, my current stuff, while I'm improving at a rate, doesn't make me wanna die, y'know?
I DON'T KNOW WHICH GAME BUT PERHAPS IT IS FOR THE BEST.
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YEH PERHAPS
Print, eh? Well, if that's the case, then no matter what you come up with, you'll have to lie in that bed!
Unless, of course, you do "heartcore: Episode of Amethyst" or, yanno, something. XD
I don't deny that this'll turn out for the best in the end. I was just concerned, is all.
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YEP, it is a bed I'll have to lie in, huu.
No worries!
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Hmmm... They both do look great ( Most of all Ame! But every one knew that! B///D ) and they do have a interesting designs to the outfits. :3
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Oooh, gotta tell ya, I like this outfit a lot better than her previous Overfiend outfit. It's nothing but up with you with your art!
This is just me being nitpicky, but it seems like Carval's teeth, along his upper jaw, seems to go over his bottom lip. Or at least, they look a little funny to me. Does he have an overbite or something?
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Thank you~! Yeah, my designs have deeefinitely improved guh.
That's intentional, thought it looked NEAT. Besides, jaw problems run in the family!
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I see, sounds like you have a plan in your head and ready to go! Looking forward to it!
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