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Published: 2004-08-28 00:16:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 4298; Favourites: 224; Downloads: 14
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InsanityI am plagued with a madness
Anger turns to pain
I am filled with a sadness
A sorrow
I cannot tame
Stumbling blindly
My brain has gone dumb
Darkness has engulfed me
My senses have gone numb
Frustrating insanity
Runs through these veins
Stuck in this profanity
Trapped in these chains
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Comments: 25
its true it is fun! but when around family hard to hide...
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WRONG being insane is fun not sad~ and if I hear people say that insanity is sad I will find them and torture them slowly~ But not you for reasons not even I know~
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Haha yep it's pretty much fun :'D but I do not think it is that funny when your insane because of mental illness 
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....I have mental illnesses that cause insanity and I think its fun. ^_^
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thank you
for righting this poam
i love it~
~ vampire maria ~
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this remind of my life when i have a very bad day . . .but most days normally for me pretty calm
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Love it X3 insanity thou art a beautiful and cruel beast
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"I am filled with a sadness"
how can you be sad when you could be torturing your enemies to death?
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Insanity like floating I air
Psychopathy a carefree life
Insanity and illusion that can't end
Captivity unable to run away
Love that song it's my fave! And so true heeheehee
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on re-reading this, I kinda like the way it sounds incomplete. Perhaps its coming unwraved? Its fitting with the subject...
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I really like this. I love the style, and even the rythm. Its all around fantastic, however, i must agree the end is lacking something.
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yeah i guess...u strted off quite brilliantly...
and u'll get tht end pretty soon too...
evn though its incomplete, it feels complete in a way...
i too dont kno wht im really talking abt...
ahh well...i guess its just cuz i like it (:
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Your style- with the separated lines, in nice. Refreshing and clean. The problem I see with it is that I don't feel connected to your pain. I don't think it conveys as well as it could.
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i've always believed that this poem's end was never quite right, didn't seem quite fitting to be an end. perhaps weeks from now the words will come to me, and i'll finish it...
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