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torchfire — The Road To Bliss
Published: 2005-06-15 05:29:18 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 13
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I like the peaceful nature of it, but like others have said, it would be better with additional lighting.
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emad, I think what may be bothering you in regard to composition is that the road seems like it wants to go to the right, but your eye can't go that way. So its distracting.
Lighting is the other thing that is bothering me a bit. Could be more dynamic, with the sun at a lower angle to give the image more depth. Feels flat at the moment.
Good concept, just needs some fine tuning.
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It does need more light, as emad stated, but I do like that the road curves back and forth. It makes the picture more interesting than a straight road.
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It needs better lighting. The sun would have helped bring out the colors more. There's something about the composition of the shot as well that's bugging me but I can't point my finger at what it is.
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