konnolibi [2004-03-19 20:28:33 +0000 UTC]

its beautiful! and it flows! and it rhymes! woooooo!

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switchbladeserenade [2004-01-28 04:17:19 +0000 UTC]

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MakiTriakor [2004-01-27 21:25:24 +0000 UTC]

i love the rhyme here, it works nicely.

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surrealstars [2004-01-27 20:10:56 +0000 UTC]

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vacant-voodoo [2004-01-27 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]

I like the repeative writing, the " although.." it works well

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