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Description Since I'm finished with the first book's story, I can put up sketches which won't be in the gallery section of the comic. 8DD Holyshit so many of them, my mind broke halfway while deciding.


1. Adolphus taking over the mind of an unfortunate Archaian member. Few can survive a takeover, they usually suffer from brain damage until the healers fix them up. Adolphus uses three kinds of bodies to move around the island. This is his first form.

2. A huge portion of this sketch is for Eugen, he's from the most prominent aristocratic family on Zentrum Island. (where the whole story takes place). The Elitheus Scathermeyer bloodline has a long history of mental diseases and premature deaths. Eugen and his brother are not spared from their fates. Eugen killed his lover and the man she was seeing at that time, he was freed when his family bailed him out so that he could continue his studies. After he became a Chaos officer, Ophelia still followed him as a deadly bodyguard thanks to Hippocrates' machines.

Elitheus Scathermeyer Eugen is notorious for random acts of violence and being overly strange, he doesn't know what he's doing most of the time and he forgets things easily. He's always in a cheerful mood and is nicknamed 'Scatterbrainer Eugen' by his cohorts.

3. The guy with the huge teeth is actually another Chaos officer from the 2nd phase, in the process of morphing into a totemic beast. Charleton Insidius is a traitor of the Archus Order. His treason lead to the implementation of stronger supernatural units in the Chaos Organisation. He broke the rules and went against the Archus oath to have the ability to become a LV5 totemic creature with more human-like attributes. (most archeologists can only become LV2 weretotems at most). I won't elaborate since I'm still developing it. *u*


Old ass pic: [link]
First apperance of Eugen's revamped design, 2nd row: [link]

Holyshit only three more commissions to go. Kay, I'm done, I have to continue doing my commissions. <3
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Comments: 82

butterflycatdragon [2008-11-15 20:30:02 +0000 UTC]

cool as aways

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ProNice In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 20:26:46 +0000 UTC]

Thats very NICE!

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TicklishSocks [2008-11-15 20:22:34 +0000 UTC]

So it a cheating-rival-whore-wig-roboter-lover-thing? D:
MY MIND IS CONFUSED AND SO IS MY CAT!
But he is potatophile and I think I am as well.

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TotenVeloren In reply to TicklishSocks [2008-11-16 09:07:49 +0000 UTC]

YESS, it's two horrible people on one robotic body >8D It can be trained to slaughter crying children.

WTF DAMN YOU POTATOPHILES, WE YAMPHILES ARE GOING TO TAKE OVER ZIMBABWE.

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TicklishSocks In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 14:06:32 +0000 UTC]

Hm... If it is able to do so, I shall get my own Awesome-robotic-children-slauhgtering-thing![TM]
"You're a general of an uprising empire? You need a bodyguard? We have the perfect solution!The Awesome-robotic-children-slauhgtering-thing![TM]"

Oh, and.. WE POTATOPHILES HAVE ALREADY INVADED ITALY!

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Ivanovaili [2008-11-15 20:21:38 +0000 UTC]

"Both of them now serve Eugen after their deaths" Thant made me rofl so hard! Your sketches and characters are always candy to the eyes!

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Limelight-Night [2008-11-15 20:08:42 +0000 UTC]

Adolphus looks cute, *u* even though he's taking over somone's braaiiiin. This is made of awesome. 8D
*eats cookie children*

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Sasuru [2008-11-15 19:52:07 +0000 UTC]

AHJSDHKASJDHasdf

revenge is effing sweet.

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Jellybean-Bby [2008-11-15 19:42:12 +0000 UTC]

You should publish your stuff. It's great.

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Aonabi In reply to ??? [2008-11-15 19:27:18 +0000 UTC]

... I'M UNHAPPY >8(
The only potatophile pedo allowed here is supposed to be meeeeeeeehhhhh

Wow, Ophelia, she is so... pretty ? The flowers on her head made me giggle XD I like Charleton design <3

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Mel-P [2008-11-15 19:17:59 +0000 UTC]

LOL Adolphus is so cute XD *bricked*

I love this whole page~

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TotenVeloren In reply to Mel-P [2008-11-15 19:21:52 +0000 UTC]

LOOOL XDD the coffee shop is all your damn idea >8D

<33

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VanRipper [2008-11-15 19:16:44 +0000 UTC]

I thought Ophelia was a girl, she would be very cute then! DAMN TRAPZ! D:<

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TotenVeloren In reply to VanRipper [2008-11-15 19:21:09 +0000 UTC]

YOU CAN DATE THE WIG. IT'S PURELY FROM OPHELIA AS HE SCALPED HER. 8DD

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VanRipper In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-15 21:23:40 +0000 UTC]

D: BUUU! You done a very bad job Toten! I hate you! I will manifest my anger in my sketchbook, drawing him as a GIRL!

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TotenVeloren In reply to VanRipper [2008-11-16 02:13:47 +0000 UTC]

BUT THE HEAD LOOKS LIKE OPHELIA, IT HAS FLOWERS. 8DD It's just that the skull and body are male. YOU'LL MAKE THE DEAD RIVAL SAD IF YOU ADD BOOBS.

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VanRipper In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 08:53:22 +0000 UTC]

He will deal with it, somehow

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WolfknightlordJ [2008-11-15 19:15:13 +0000 UTC]

Noo, my dumb mouse clicked out of everything. I was going to say that Ophelia was creepy, and Eugen is insane for doing that to them.

And further more, the traitor officer makes me think of a Kachina.

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TotenVeloren In reply to WolfknightlordJ [2008-11-15 19:27:50 +0000 UTC]

LMAO XDD haha, SMASH YOUR MOUSE D:<

Lol, Eugen was always the resident nutjob in the whole of Chaos. Ophelia cheated on him and he just went beserk. The other guy did pwn Eugen in a fight, but he still died. Eugen still forgives them in his own way by entrusting his life to Ophelia now.

Woah, I saw it and it looks interesting. A Kachina with less details. XD

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 02:41:39 +0000 UTC]

-stares at name in your signature- It starts with an R....

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TotenVeloren In reply to Jirakotsu [2008-11-16 02:47:25 +0000 UTC]

Lol no, silly. That's my surname, my name is no mystery.

And pray tell, why did you reply to this irrelevant conversation?

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 02:54:49 +0000 UTC]

WELL, RACHEL IS MY NAME...which...is why I clicked on a reply button and typed '-stares at name in your signature- It starts with an R...' cuz...I dunno. I see my name somewhere and have to type something to it. Weird habit of mine.
: You are an irrelevant person.
: And you are an irrelevant icon!
: ARE NOT!
: Are too. >.>
: ... -sticks pixels onto a magnet and deletes-


Ignore me, I'm just high on sugary things. e.e

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TotenVeloren In reply to Jirakotsu [2008-11-16 02:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Lol it's not an R. My name is Erika Lee, dur.

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 03:05:08 +0000 UTC]

WELL, MY NAME STARTS WITH AN R. IN YER FAIC. OR...IN YOUR WHATEVER.
Erika = ...two of my friend's names.... MAYBE IT CAN BE THREE.
AND EVERYTIME I SEE 'dur' I THINK OF DOUGHNUTS. THIS MAKES ME GIGGLE.

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TotenVeloren In reply to Jirakotsu [2008-11-16 03:55:49 +0000 UTC]

TOGETHER, WE ARE THE ABBREVIATIONS FOR EMERGENCY ROOM.

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 04:15:01 +0000 UTC]

WE ARE. THAT IS SO WACKEH TAFFEH I MUST REMEMBER IT!!! C:
E.R.!!!!! That is...just so EPIC ROFL

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TotenVeloren In reply to Jirakotsu [2008-11-16 04:22:49 +0000 UTC]

OUR GRAND SLOGAN: MESS WITH US AND YOU'LL BE GOING TO ONE.

I do flaming barrel rolls of death upon our enemies with a plastered upon my face

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 04:27:43 +0000 UTC]

AH YES, WHAT FUN.THIS WOULD BE FUNNY AS A DRAWING, TO SEE IT PLASTERED ON DA.

AND WHAT I DO...IS... <--- do a face like that at them then eat them/and or scream really loudly and make their ears bleed.

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TotenVeloren In reply to Jirakotsu [2008-11-16 04:33:31 +0000 UTC]

My battle face


ER

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Jirakotsu In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-16 04:35:13 +0000 UTC]

= BFF'S BITCHES C:

LOL THIS IS HELPING ME UN-BORED-ED-ED MYSELF.

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WolfknightlordJ In reply to TotenVeloren [2008-11-15 19:29:36 +0000 UTC]

Agh, the poor mouse suffered enough abuse by falling off my desk multiple times.

...Entrusting his life..to a dead Opheliahead. Uh.

Yeah. A...jackal kachina. That's black.

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