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poor girl :*
this is my every summer story
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and such burned hands. so interesting. such a fashionable pose and suit and i dont know what to make of it because i dont want to take the obvious from it. does that make sense lol? such a beautiful and elegant style you keep here no matter your subject matter.
to rot away in the sun...she looks proud to die so beautiful.
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lma wifey this is really deformed looking but i like how you colored the knees
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mostly that was the point, the rest of it is there to be attached to the legs because i felt like making the very red knees. lma.
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i love that she is trying to still look beautiful when obviously that nasty sunburn of hers must really hurt.
i believe her neck to be too long and thick for this piece. her face looks too small probably because of the thick neck and because you elongated her forhead --- the eyes need to be higher up on the face, this will balance out her cranium.
her fore-arms are too short compared to her upper-arm (bicep-part arm) of the arm. a trick that can help you is that the fore-arm and the upper arm are the same length. shoulder to elbow--- and elbow to wrist her arms should be the same length. i think if you take this 'rule' into consideration her left arm won't look too stubby.
i think the legs and feet look wonderful and the perspective on the back foot works nicely. You are wonderful with thses watercolours and this is still a beautiful piece and it is with my happiness that i want to favourite it.
i hope i helped.
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yes thank you.
recently i've been having anatomy problems (that i may or may not notice, but ink over anyway because i am anxious to get to coloring), so any advice/critique is appreciated!
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her elbows just slays me as do the watercolours.
the hands which seem to be foremost might be larger unless they are just small hands by nature in which case it is not good for me to argue with nature she could kill me with a bat of her eyelashes also the neck is like the same width as her torso (i am hyperbolizing to emphasize my point i think) and her right leg which is bent might be more receded but maybe not on both accounts. they are probably best the way they already are.
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your hyperbolizing is my +fav. please, i know nothing about the human body!!
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good to see more work from you
the knees and legs are my favourite parts.
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I love the lovely collarbone and boney-looking shoulders <:
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