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Story, Art, Colors & Letters by;Ivan Mass [link]
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MurdererDelacroix [2009-01-07 19:05:09 +0000 UTC]
Cool art, and the whole store is pretty spooky!
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destronD-69 [2009-01-06 01:15:47 +0000 UTC]
I like this one... seems to be set even further in the future than the current AHM storyline ... I like how it ties past story lines together with the new...
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Hehe-m [2009-01-05 23:01:09 +0000 UTC]
The concept is cool but also kinda spooky too. Must be heck of a job to be the warden of such a jail.
(So what happens when Spike needs to go to the bathroom? Or is he a mostly mechanized cyborg?)
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Robot1979 In reply to Hehe-m [2009-01-05 23:40:32 +0000 UTC]
If Spike needs a bathrom, he go out to the cerebros armor... heheh
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ninjha [2009-01-05 13:36:45 +0000 UTC]
It's cool that the head of Fortress Maximus is in the center of Autbot city.
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CWingSyun [2009-01-05 12:51:11 +0000 UTC]
Great art and story (from what I could get from this..). Like others have said this Mosaic could benefit from some editting just to help it flow a bit more.
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LBDNytetrayn [2009-01-05 10:12:42 +0000 UTC]
Nice... so Fortress Maximus is somehow the new Autobot prison, and Spike's the warden, eh?
--LBD "Nytetrayn"
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CykoHedgehog In reply to LBDNytetrayn [2009-01-05 14:59:17 +0000 UTC]
Feels like several dffrent takes on FM comign togeather, IDW's with him being a Warden; and Japanese's Fortress with the Giant Head inside over seeing everything.
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LBDNytetrayn In reply to CykoHedgehog [2009-01-25 02:11:17 +0000 UTC]
Indeed, I can dig it.
--LBD "Nytetrayn"
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ElMutanto [2009-01-05 09:11:35 +0000 UTC]
Garrus 9? isn't that a Mass Effect Refference? or maybe the other way? XD
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lonegamer7 [2009-01-05 08:34:27 +0000 UTC]
Other than needing a good editing (sorry, Ivan, but that's the truth, like 'Zeke and Nuclear said), intriguing story references. Garrus-9, a human is involved, and the "Spike Project". :3
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Argusshaitan [2009-01-05 07:18:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice concept and great art. The scene feels a bit rushed and cramped for a single page though.
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JZLobo [2009-01-05 05:37:37 +0000 UTC]
Ivan really needs to get someone to proofread his English.
It's a cool concept though.
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NuclearConvoy In reply to JZLobo [2009-01-05 06:54:45 +0000 UTC]
I agree. The idea is very cool, the art is fantastic...but it suffers from the sloppy 2nd Language English.
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JZLobo In reply to NuclearConvoy [2009-01-05 16:24:15 +0000 UTC]
Okay, now this is getting creepy...
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NuclearConvoy In reply to JZLobo [2009-01-06 02:39:36 +0000 UTC]
Welcome to... The Scary Door!
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JZLobo In reply to NuclearConvoy [2009-01-06 04:20:48 +0000 UTC]
Cue the Twilight Zone theme.
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rodimus45 [2009-01-05 05:26:39 +0000 UTC]
i wonder if it has anything to do with Spike Witwicky
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MagusTheLofty [2009-01-05 05:21:09 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. I'm not sure I was able to follow the story very well, but I really liked the art.
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FrankORourke [2009-01-05 05:18:32 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm the art is good as is the coloring, but the Dialog is a bit off and didn't make too much sense to me.
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