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Shamelessly reusing scenes to make the updates faster. :3

What language the notebook is written in, you ask?
One of these: French, Serbian, German, Croatian, Italian or Hungarian. Doesn't matter which one, so I leave this up to your headcanon. But it will matter later on. (plot-driven coincidence) :3

In this comic, Equestrian Common and English are considered pretty much the same language, though they differ in some words and expressions. (Let's say Canadian English, since the show is made in there.) More will be revealed about the cause of this later in the story.

Yep, she's just jealous, Tavi is actually a nice girl.

Also, BonBon is wrong on another thing: Ponyville is getting a new librarian as they speak. :3

10 bits says she will get lost...

(I'm experimenting on a new format, doing everything (including the captions) in Inkscape.)


As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
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Comments: 248

wildhawk441 [2016-12-16 01:03:46 +0000 UTC]

Ok. This is interesting. You set your comic roughly (my own estimate/observation) 3-6 months before Twilight moves into the Golden Oak Library.
I am intrigued!

Also, I SO would like it if whatever Lyra is searching for reveals more about Star Swirl the Bearded! Anytime we get historical info about Equestria
(be it fan's interpretations or canon facts like in the S4 premiere or Granny Smith's anecdotes in multiple ep.s) is very cool!

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CasualBrony999 In reply to wildhawk441 [2018-10-23 02:47:37 +0000 UTC]

OH THE GOOD OL' DAYS WHERE STAR SWIRL WAS JUST A LEGEND!

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leehomwang [2016-09-03 09:39:23 +0000 UTC]

Only love DJ

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dinoanimalrock46 [2015-12-01 11:24:16 +0000 UTC]

A library. WITHOUT librarian. And anypony can come in and make noise as he wants to. IT'S THE PARADISE!!!!!!Β 

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rainbowdash10124 [2015-11-16 12:48:25 +0000 UTC]

will we see twilight and can u ship em later

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The-Waith [2015-11-05 01:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Judging by thatΒ symbol I'm thinking a certain bearded unicorn wizard has something to do with this.

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the-75th-hunger-game [2015-10-10 09:53:43 +0000 UTC]

isn't 'equestrian common' just scribbles?

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TriteBristle In reply to the-75th-hunger-game [2015-10-10 23:52:58 +0000 UTC]

We've seen an english-like and a hieroglyph-like written representation of if in the show so far, I presume the latter is the "archaic" style for them.

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the-75th-hunger-game In reply to TriteBristle [2015-10-14 13:54:40 +0000 UTC]

oh

right

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EpicBronyL [2015-09-18 22:17:30 +0000 UTC]

You can never truly escape from the Sociopolitical schemes of the upper-class world. Octavia has a reputation.Β 

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quentin1326 [2015-09-06 00:47:21 +0000 UTC]

Those English sure do get around!

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PrincessTwilight04 [2015-07-29 11:06:07 +0000 UTC]

Β <(Β Β no octavia is not a trouble... not just because she's talking quitly )>

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ZanarNaryon [2015-03-22 10:35:40 +0000 UTC]

Sooooooooo, she was not english?
maybe Norwegian (Please Norwegian)

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TriteBristle In reply to ZanarNaryon [2015-03-22 10:48:00 +0000 UTC]

I wrote about it in the description. It is generally advisable to read my descriptions if you want additional bits of information. :3

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ZanarNaryon In reply to TriteBristle [2015-03-22 11:20:13 +0000 UTC]

NO! I AM TO LAZY!!!!

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TriteBristle In reply to ZanarNaryon [2015-03-22 11:38:32 +0000 UTC]

Then you shall never know... >:3

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Shadowlord123456 [2015-02-28 03:16:20 +0000 UTC]

I'll take that bet!

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CharaViolet [2015-02-10 23:09:27 +0000 UTC]

ITS TWILIGHT'S CUTIE MARK!

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TriteBristle In reply to CharaViolet [2015-02-11 01:13:07 +0000 UTC]

Nope, but it's somepony's CM indeed. :3
(It will be revealed/confirmed on the very next page (that I'm working on right now).)

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pokeperson1000 In reply to TriteBristle [2015-02-19 16:09:45 +0000 UTC]

... Star Swirl?

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CharaViolet In reply to TriteBristle [2015-02-11 01:28:17 +0000 UTC]

ok i still didnt got into the finish but im sure its cool!

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ArtisticNinjaCat [2014-12-14 17:10:28 +0000 UTC]

That looks a lot like Twilight's CM

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marinus18 [2014-11-21 06:33:29 +0000 UTC]

I would think they should ask Twilight. She's an expert on weird and unusual magic.

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The-Blazing-Tiger In reply to marinus18 [2014-12-01 23:22:45 +0000 UTC]

twilight is not in ponyvill yet this is before the events of the nightmare moon incident with the elements.

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marinus18 In reply to The-Blazing-Tiger [2014-12-02 05:32:18 +0000 UTC]

but later on in the story she is there and I would think visiting her would be a good idea.

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HugoMndz [2014-11-11 02:04:12 +0000 UTC]

If by 'trouble' you mean 'She might take away her loved girl', then there's a serious trouble right there

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sophie123456789a [2014-10-15 16:04:09 +0000 UTC]

10 bits says she will get lost...

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Killed2013 [2014-09-24 13:34:27 +0000 UTC]

Β 10 bits says she will get lost...
Right on!

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Wait0wat [2014-09-17 00:27:15 +0000 UTC]

Nice nod on the languageΒ beerier. Β Not much storyΒ writersΒ of comic-makers ...actually, none at all from what I make of it....catch-up on that.

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tank2259 [2014-07-13 10:18:41 +0000 UTC]

what could go Β wrong

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ColonelBSacquet [2014-06-26 19:12:12 +0000 UTC]

Oh, in the Name of the Princesses, BonBon ... why are you so possessive ? Why would Octavia Harmony be trouble, tell me ?

And what's wrong with saying "anyone" rather than "anypony" ? Isn't "anypony" a replacement for "anybody" ?

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CJPfingsten [2014-05-05 01:07:19 +0000 UTC]

Just noticed something...if Bon-Bon has a hard time reading the journal because it's not in "Equestrian Common," then how could she read "Lyra Heartstings" on the cover at the beginning of the story?

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TriteBristle In reply to CJPfingsten [2014-05-05 10:43:20 +0000 UTC]

The same way you can read the name of anyone from a foreign country that has a different native language but uses more or less the same alphabet. :3
So the journal cover text could have been anything actually, she still would have assumed that it's either a name, or foreign for "notebook/journal". She took her bet, and was proven to be right.

And later I will reveal that "Lyra Heartstrings" actually means "journal". xD

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GaiaMIX In reply to TriteBristle [2015-09-17 20:40:47 +0000 UTC]

Or that it was a brandname of sorts, like barbie or hello kitty notebooks.

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CJPfingsten In reply to TriteBristle [2014-05-07 00:11:50 +0000 UTC]

Nice...cover......
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..
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B) YEEEAAAAHHHH!!

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SongMina [2014-03-22 14:10:56 +0000 UTC]

THE COUCH IS BACK! ^_^

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BadlyDrawnTurtle In reply to SongMina [2014-05-16 01:01:56 +0000 UTC]

I'm still waiting for it to be destroyed horrifically. Go furniture abuse!

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SongMina In reply to BadlyDrawnTurtle [2014-05-16 21:19:08 +0000 UTC]

but its so prettyyy!

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BadlyDrawnTurtle In reply to SongMina [2014-05-16 22:00:30 +0000 UTC]

If someone promises destruction of a couch, there is nothing that can mitigate this need, but to carry it out. It must be done. And so I shall enjoy it.

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SongMina In reply to BadlyDrawnTurtle [2014-05-17 06:44:32 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!

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jeremeymcdude [2014-03-19 03:55:35 +0000 UTC]

I Say. good show, good show, WHAT. What! WHERES TWILIGHT. SHE MUST BE THERE BY NOW!!!!!

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Owl-Parchment [2014-03-10 18:27:38 +0000 UTC]

The clock is the same color scheme as Bon Bon. Lol!

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KiwiJr [2014-02-11 06:02:20 +0000 UTC]

Another question answered!

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987654321o [2014-02-04 07:06:56 +0000 UTC]

i think its doctor whooves time pritty soon

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fotland42 [2014-02-03 22:46:42 +0000 UTC]

A ten-star star, eh? That's a really good star.

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splatter789 [2014-01-18 20:06:41 +0000 UTC]

BonBon! Tavi is a wonderful mare and I'd love to have her as a friend! Also I'm in on that bet 15 bits says she gets lost.

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MLP-Fan20 [2013-12-28 22:40:07 +0000 UTC]

I'm in on the bet...she will most likely get lost...Β 

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LightningBoltSuprise [2013-12-11 01:52:29 +0000 UTC]

DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUNNN

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Raxadian [2013-11-29 17:39:16 +0000 UTC]

So Octavia is trouble? Mmm...

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TheDragonPlayer [2013-11-06 02:13:18 +0000 UTC]

GAH! How do you do that!? xD

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