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TriteBristle β Heartstrings ch5/p06 - A sudden visitor
Published: 2014-02-25 01:02:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 55186; Favourites: 499; Downloads: 351
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Next page - Previous page - First pageLe gasp! She seems to be afraid of BonBon! But fear not, for Detective Lyra is on the case! Sort of.
Wait, if everything is closed then why did we open up at all?
Why, because that's what the script says! Plus, some ponies need to get their daily sugar dose, and the Cakes are closed too right now.
Also fun fact: The 9th panel came out rather creepy on the first try (a stare that would legitimately make anypony turn around and leave the shop without a sound), so I had to remake it. Damn it Bons, I know you want to be alone with Lyra but that's going too far!
Next on Heartstrings:
Now to watch these two and try not to get a heart attack.
As always, MLP:FiM is owned by Hasbro and created by , please don't sue me.
The effect's font type is "Badaboom BB", made by Nate Piekos, and used for non-profit means.
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Notice the "probably". :3
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Curse you, brain! Telling my eyes things!
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This is getting really good!!
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I feel like Alfred from the last Batman. EveryΒ time I come to deviant art I look for the next page and it still isn't there. I am not trying to rush your creative process but I am just like "garrrrr" every time it isn't there.
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> walks into Bon Bon's shop
> expects to see Lyra
> surprised to see Bon Bon
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'Creeped out', not 'surprised'. Like when someone builds up the courage to do something, but give into the fear and back down when they see the cause of their fear face to face.
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MAKE MORE NOW I FREKIN WANNA KILL MY SELF ON THIS CLIFF HANGER
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Hang onto your life instead, since the comic will hopefully go on for long years I think you'll want to live to read 'em all! :3
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Now I really wanna see that original panel... If for no other reason than sleep is overrated.
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went to bed at 9 read all the chapters of this comic last night , looked at clock quarter past 2 in morning, dam i have work in the morningΒ
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NOOOOOOO! Every friggn comic i go to read ends before its over!!! please continue your work i need this!!
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Next page is in production. :3
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hooray!!! i shall dance like a butterfly across kumquats in spring!!!
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Dance like a butterfly across kumquats... What?
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metaphorically speaking
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*Reads the third panel* ...I see what you did there.
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Via the way, I'd of love to of seen that creepy pre-post of BonBon's stare.
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Oh thank Celestia I've gotten to the last page for now.Β Β Β I need to get to bed for work tomorrow and CAN'T STOP READING!
Absolutely love the interaction between Bonbon and Lyra.
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BonBon sceres the dung outa evrypony! I know how she feels but I make fun with it.
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Is there a regular schedule for these comics, or do you just post whenever?
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There's no regular schedule tbh, I post them as I'm done with them. Which greatly depends on the actual page, and how much free time I can spare for the comic.
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Do you still have that? I wanna see that creepy bonbon image. a link? please? (these comics are great by the way, and i was gonna ask, how many chapters are you going to make. I mean, yeah, it would be nice to have no specific deadline for ending sorta bullcrap, Β but i wanna make sure i know your not going to stop all of a sudden or something crazy. an ongoing comic would be cool. anyway, bonny appears to be picking things up from lyra, the way she's leaning over the counter. and bonbon zecora? not a shipping or anything, but zecora is an alchemist, lives in the ever free, bonbon is pretty much a candy witch, some sort of connection?
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Unfortunately since I changed the image itself, I no longer have it. Maybe for the better for all of us. xD
In plans, I have more than 50 chapters. We'll see how far I'll actually get.
Bons indeed met Zecora already while looking for ingredients in the Everfree, they exchanged valuable knowledge about concoctions.
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I would be creeped out if Bonbon looked at me that way too.
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Panel 7: Le Heart Attack
I want to see that original panel 9 now.
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Seconded. Β I want to see that panel. Β TriteBristle could totally release it separately from the rest of the comic.
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unfortunately that can't happen... oh well...
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Her special talent is making and selling candy, but children are afraid of her.
Destiny sure has a sense of humor.
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why no one allow the use of anyone instead of any pony i mean really is that much of a crime to use any one
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Bonbon is basically being a grammar nazi
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Uh bonbon's pink strand in the second to last panel looks a bit ... off. ( extra line, unfinished line)
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More like rendering issue, an extra control point solved the problem. Thanks for letting me know!
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Aw poor Bonbon, at least the little pony like Lyra so i would bet Lyra will say there is nothing to be afraid and the little one will probably like Bonbon right after. Probably... Β ( I would hope though )
Wonderful page 
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