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Kara-Yami [2018-05-03 00:53:32 +0000 UTC]

I like the overall style of the painting! It very personal and it seems like you're really going somewhere with it! I do suggest cleaning up the edges to make it more appealing to the eye. I personally dont think its that its to dark, but that the some of the colors are saturated. Although I do love that green! I like the shape of him, but I find that the head is a little awkward. Because it seems the top half (from the eyes up)and the middle area (from the onset shoulders) and the bottom half are different angles. (mentioning this, the ears are to cute!)So I feel with some tweaking in the shape itself will really help pull things together. So keep in mind that its easy to get saturated or muddy colors, and shape is very important! I suggest looking at some wolf/dog references for a better idea of angles. I hope this is somewhat helpful! 
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shanna123ify [2018-05-01 15:45:30 +0000 UTC]

Hello!  I agree with Naira that the piece overall is too dark (though the colors are to die for :3).  Values can be really hard to get down when working in colors.  Depending on the program you are working with you should be able to switch back and for from color to black and white.  This will really allow you to see if your work as enough contrast.  If you are unable to do this with your program you could also try looking at your work with REALLY squinted eyes.  This makes it so that your eyes can ONLY pick up the lightest and darkest values in your piece.  When I did this to view your work the only thing that truly stood out was the tongue and tattoo.  The color you picked for these is wonder, a really toxic mint color (I just loved it!).  I would highly encourage you to incorporate this as a highlight color throughout you work as it really is quite lovely.

Hope this helped and keep up the good work!

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DollyMemoir [2018-04-10 00:10:45 +0000 UTC]

Hiiii! my name is Naira and i want to give you some advice if you dont mind  !

i really like this piece,the way you usted the color so it doesnt clash is really nice,but the general piece looks a little bit dark,nothing is really on the focus of attention and i will work on that,also i will make the lines more noticeable since there is not much definition to the whole body and also the expression on the face,not really sure of what the character is feeling so i will put more emphasis on it.
anyhow,good job and keep going!   

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