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Ok finally got around to finishing page 1. Let me be clear on something here.

I HATE this page. I can see problems with it. Not really convinced my character is running in the first panel, wasn't sure about the breath effect in the second panel, the third one is probably the best out of it all when I thought it would be the worst, I wasn't sure about the shadows for being struck by lighting, and I guess the last panel is ok, but again, not really sure on the shadows.

I'd hit a point where this had been on my computer for weeks now, and I just needed to do what I could and post it instead of fussing over it anymore. Besides I can always come back and revise it later once I have more experience with doing comics.

Critique and suggestions are welcome and appreciated.

Description
Ok finally got around to finishing page 1. Let me be clear on something here.

I HATE this page. I can see problems with it. Not really convinced my character is running in the first panel, wasn't sure about the breath effect in the second panel, the third one is probably the best out of it all when I thought it would be the worst, I wasn't sure about the shadows for being struck by lighting, and I guess the last panel is ok, but again, not really sure on the shadows.

I'd hit a point where this had been on my computer for weeks now, and I just needed to do what I could and post it instead of fussing over it anymore. Besides I can always come back and revise it later once I have more experience with doing comics.

Critique and suggestions are welcome and appreciated.