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Published: 2011-05-14 04:53:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 10890; Favourites: 229; Downloads: 32
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Here we have the latest work in my ongoing mission to get my list of request pics out of the way. This one comes by way of , who's a heavy advocate of Danny Phantom/Angry Beavers crossovers.The basic premise is based on a scene from one of his crossover fanfics. Beaver brother Daggett, who's befriended Danny, is more than a little annoyed at Dash Baxter's constant, unyielding bullying of our teen hero. So he seeks to right this egregious wrong in his own typical beaver fashion. Danny meanwhile, is just sitting back and watching the show with a look of complete and total satisfaction. Tucker likes what he sees as well. Sam, meanwhile, merely responds with a playful eye roll, not really approving of Daggett's actions, but not exactly complaining, either.
Dude, I hope this pic meets with your approval. Granted, it took me a little longer to finish than I anticipated, but given all the work I put into this, I hope you'll find it was worth the wait. I hope everyone else likes what they see as well.
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I'm sure a lot of people agree with you there. Glad you like it.^_^
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Yep, that's pretty much the consensus with that pic. Glad you like it.^_^
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Glad to hear it. Glad you like the pic as well.^_^
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You wouldn't be the only one who thinks so. Glad you like the pic.^_^
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I hate Dash as much as the next social outcast. Perhaps he really does taste like failure, as they say...
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Who knows? It's entirely possible.^_^
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DEATH BY BEAVERS!
...I hope no one takes that the wrong way.
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Anyone who does probably wouldn't consider it a bad way to go. In any event, glad you liked the pic.^_^
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Daggett: THROOOOOAAAAAAAAAATT!
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Oh, I don't know about that. Going for the throat might put him into shock, thus putting an end to his pain.^_^
Glad you like the pic.^_^
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Ah hahahah ha ah ahh hahahah a ha ah ha hehehe ok in good I think I got it all outa my system. *take another look* nope ppppppp hahahahaha aaaah hahaaha
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Yeah, that was pretty much the general consensus with this pic. Glad you like it.^_^
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I'm laughing so hard it hurts.
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Well, just try not to burst something.^_^
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Dash really does deserve that though I've never understood why bullies do what they do.
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Yeah, I've never understood it, either. There's just no logic to it, is there?
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Still, I find that's the thing with a lot of Hartman's cartoons. He tends to favor the old cliches when it comes to characters, especially those in schoolyard society.
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You mean like Vicky and Francis
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Well, I don't know if you'd label Vicky as any kind of a cliche (except for maybe your standard-issue sociopath). Francis, on the other hand, IS pretty much on the cliche side.
Of course, there are other "old school" cliches Hartman employs, such as kids dressing up all formal for school dances and such. Except for prom, is there really any school dance that requires formal wear anymore?
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No not really but then again I didn't go to my prom, thought it was a waste of resources
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Ah, it's not so bad.^_^
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Speak for yourself I went to a high school that predominantly jocks, redneck hillbilly types, and preps. I was an outcast that's one of the reasons I fell in love with the Danny phantom show cause he reminded me of me.
Also thought Sam should know Burner hates girls like Paulina, says if Paulina spent half as much type worrying about real stuff instead of her appearance maybe she's amount to something, she'll also be happy to know that if you do let Burner join team phantom she can expect a few pranks to be pulled on the beautiful people courtesy of you friendly neighborhood junk ghost.^_^
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Well, I wasn't the most popular guy in school either. But I just kind of ignored what the so-called popular kids did.
You've got Burner campaigning for a spot on the team now?^_^
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I did the same, found a small group of friends and just watched the day to day struggle of the popular kids with a despondent air, kinds of like an Observant;.
As for Burner is that asking to much? I don't want to do something that would offend.
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Well, I don't know if I'd say I was despondent in high school. I had a small group of friends and I was satisfied with that. Today, I still have a small group of friends and I'm perfectly happy with that, too.
As for Burner joining up, well, I didn't say it was asking too much. I also didn't say that I wasn't going to bring him back, either (for what it's worth, I'm thinking about a story that'll give him a love interest, like you want...only it'll be with a human).
All this explanation and apology...are you under the impression that you're annoying me? I'm guessing you're having kind of a sensitive day today, because I'd certainly like to think I haven't given you that impression. I KNOW I never said you had to go away and busy yourself with other projects to "get out of my hair". So stay in touch, man. I'm hear to listen to whatever anyone has to say.
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Thank you, you are a good friend Aaron and Burner and I are happy to hear you will be keeping him around.
I was having a sensitive day the last friend I have left just had a seizure not to long ago and has had to be on medication for a while and the thought of being losing him scared me. We've been like brothers since the day we met.
I did think I was getting on your nerves, but I'm glad that I'm not. I also wanted to tell you that I. In Regards to Burners power you said he might be a little over powered, the metal beast construct isn't really a power so much as a plot device I thought would lend itself to the big climatic peak when Technus would reveal his plan. I mean he can do it but only under extreme conditions; kind of like Danny and his second transfomation,
I take this to mean you got a chance to read the notes in full?
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Yeah, I don't have any intentions of letting Burner become a one-shot. So you don't need to worry about that.
Sorry to hear about your friend. Hopefully they found out what the problem was and things will work out for him there.
Well, I'll see what I can do. I still need to read the note with regards to the story, though. I haven't done it yet because my mind hasn't been here 100%. I know there are some changes I'm going to have to make and I need to be creatively focused for that. But I'm going to get to it very soon, okay?
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But you read the other one explaining powers and such correct?
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Okay, managed to read both notes. I'm thinking I might tweak a few things, though. You've got some good basic ideas here with the overall story, but I'm thinking Technus would be less direct and more subtle in his manipulations of Burner. I know he was rather direct in how he manipulated Skulker in my story, "Pairing Off", but that was really because he had no choice. I'm thinking of maybe having him act more like he did with Danny and Valerie in "Flirting with Disaster", just subtly manipulating Burner into the proper positions.
So here's what I'm thinking. Danny and Sam's first encounter with Burner is purely by chance, and it's totally Dash's fault (this is when Technus first escapes and they have to call off pursuing him to save Dash). At this point, Technus sees a pawn he can use to his advantage. By scanning frequent updates on social media, he knows where Dash is going to be most times of the day, so he stages an attack on Burner's home, making it look like Dash was responsible. Then, when he's fleeing Team Phantom for a second time, he directs his escape route to cross with Burner's second attack on Dash, once again, forcing Danny and Sam to save Dash once again. Then, for Technus' master stroke, he runs a bulldozer through Burner's home, making it look as though the city's begun demolition on the property. This drives Burner over the edge, resulting in the dinosaur bit while Danny and the others are still trying to figure out what's going on. When Team Phantom takes it down, though, Burner emerges from the wreckage of the dinosaur in his armored form, purely as a last-ditch effort. But when he finally gets taken down by Danny, all the pieces start to come together and they deduce how he's been manipulated by Technus. Then comes the part where they have to take Technus down.
Now, I still don't have a master plan for Technus yet, but I'm thinking about maybe having Tucker declaring Burner's home a protected property, setting up what will likely be the first of several policies leading to cooperation between Earth and the Ghost Zone, with Amity Park on the front lines (the basic gist of it being that ghosts will be able to stay on earth, so long as they make nice and play by the rules).
Well, that's what I got right now. Questions? Comments?^_^
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Sounds like a good idea I do have question though. While Burner is attacking dash is he in his armor construct or not cause? I was wondering how you felt about the whole true image revealed after the metal beast is destroyed. I like the bulldozer bit it's a nice touch plus we could have Burner possess the same bulldozer turning it into a hotrod monster and using it in an attack.
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I knew I forgot to address something.
Actually, I came up with a way to vary his first two attacks, which are mostly him picking on Dash. For his first attack, he manipulates Dash's car itself, taking him on a "killer joyride", if you will. And since Kwan is in the car with him, that's why both Danny and Sam have to break off pursuit of Technus, to save both dummies and stop the car. For Burner's second attack, he's transforming an old car into a ghostly monstrosity to attack him, with Desile attacking alongside it. That's why even though there's more than one member of Team Phantom chasing Technus, they all have to break off pursuit to save Dash, by stopping both the car AND the dog.
As for the armor, I thought it would actually be a nice little something to add for his third attack. The point being to show that this time, he's completely going for broke and also kind of saying, "You think what you've seen so far is ALL he can do? Get ready for a surprise!"^_^ As for the Bulldozer, well, we could always make it part of the dinosaur he creates, right?
Bottom line is, this is going to be the story that introduces your character to the world. When that happens, we don't want the audience to see everything he can do right out of the gate, because then, you've got nothing to build on for the rest of the story. And that's the point. With each attack, I want to build him up a little more...and then a little more...until we ultimately get to the point where, when he does go all out in his third attack, it all just explodes in this final, huge crescendo. Does it sound like these ideas kind of hit that mark for you?
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Bull's eye these ideas sound perfect absolutly perfect, I really like the killer joy ride that sound like something he would do, and to explain how he possesses car he enters through the tail pipe that way he is unseen. I love the build up and the scene where Desile attacks to. I do have one question though what about his joining the team after the whole thing is said and done. Will it still happen at some point?
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I'm glad you like the ideas. Actually I came up with a way to illustrate how he possesses vehicles as well. You mention entering through the tailpipe. Well, I'm thinking maybe with this piece of his essence, maybe have it seem almost like a mass of ecto energy, only it's shaped like his face. It would be kind of like a small nod to Shaman King, if you're familiar with that manga series at all.
As for him joining the team, well, I don't know if it'll happen right at the end of the first story. If it happens, I will say that I would probably hold his membership in the same regard as Jack, Maddie, Danielle and Valerie in that he would be kind of a "reserve" member of the team. What that means is, each of these people does their own thing primarily, but they will run with the team if they happen to be in the same place at the same time. That's my thinking on it, anyway.
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I can live with that as for the possession the car will still morph into a hotrod version of its every day look right?
Oh and Burner says as long as he gets to hang out with and have real friends at some point he is okay with being a reserve team member, but he still not gonna eat gnasty burger food. It gives him food poisoning.^_^
I can't wait to see or read your next post how close are to posting something anyway I've missed seeing your art?
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Well, I'm glad everyone on your end is okay with my choices. One thing I did forget to mention, though, is that I hope an idea for Technus' plot in the story will materialize at some point, because I think I've got a pretty good idea as to just where in my series Burner is going to be introduced.
As for when my next post is going to be, I'm actually hoping to have something up by the weekend. Probably just a simple pic, but it'll still be better than nothing. Then, next week, I'll be on vacation, during which time, I hope to have at least another three or four pics finished and posted. But even after that, I hope to still be far enough ahead of the game that I can still make regular submissions, even after I'm back at work.^_^
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Well I have an idea for Technus, what if he goes after some new military component to combine with a new type of android super computer, like a shout out to the zeta project.
Also when you see Burner's armor I know it will look junky but my plan is that over the course a week tucker makes some serious upgrades to it and when they are reveiled in a later story the armor no longer looks like a pile of used parts but a merger on ironman and the guyver. Basically what I'm thinking is keep the guyver helmet that I'll show you when my brother is done but the rest of the body is guvyer with an ironman power core in the chest. What do ya think?
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Well, I'm pretty sure Technus will be going after something big. After all, he's all about upgrading himself. I'm just not sure what it'll be yet. Truth be told, I don't really know anything about Zeta Project.
As for Burner, well, my thinking was that he could make his armor out of pretty much anything. So if he happens to be in a more high-tech area, so will his armor become more high-tech. However, just to give him a bit of a weakness, he isn't able to control high-tech machines as well as he can control automotive things. Oh, he can still make armor out of it, simple things like that, but he can't operate it as well as someone like Technus can. Does that sound like an idea?
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Well my idea for Technus was that he would go after a new kind of biological super computer android in order to harness it raw power and military grade combat skills as well as it vast arsenal of high tech weapons.
As for Burner's armor which btw I took the liberty of nameing Fire Fright( get cause it sounds like fire fight) I had the idea that the at configuration would be upgraded but it still can be formed from any metal in the area. My plan for it was in the future I wanted to see a show down between Skulker's skultech armor and burner's ghostly guyver suit. I thought it would make for a great fight scene and really give a chance for him to shine and tucker a chance to really show off his tech skills throw the armor's upgrades. I wanted the armor to be something special something that would set it apart from othe ghostly constructs. But if you don't like this I will submit to your idea.
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Well, it's interesting. Sounds like something Technus would do. We're gonna need to work on some specifics, though.
Ah. You're already thinking ahead to a future story with Burner vs. Technus. Okay, I've got a better idea of where your head's at now. Well, in THAT context, if we did something at THAT moment, instead of at the end of this first appearance story, as you suggested, that would be a better fit. Then it wouldn't look like we were trying to jam too much into him all at once.
And I actually think I know where that perfect moment would be, too. There's a story I'll be writing later on in the series (much, MUCH later on, by the way) where Skulker finally manages to discover the Phantom Palm Pummeller in his SkulkTech armor. But when he uses it on Danny and Sam, he uses it at full power and ends up shorting out their powers for a full 24-hour period. This leaves family and friends trying to keep Danny and Sam safe from a legion of ghostly foes who see them as easy pickings. Putting Burner in that scenario in a tight against Skulker would make a good fit.
As for Burner's first appearance, I think I know where that's going to be now. And it might end up being sooner than you think.^_^
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Specifics? Such as?
As for the rest sounds like a plan man! I'm intrigued
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Well, your idea is fairly basic. For specifics, we'll need to come up with what the machine does, how Technus plans to override it and what he plans to do with it once he's done that.
Glad you like the rest of my ideas.^_^
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Well i figured that since it is a peice of military hardware maybe it would be a moblie computer to rival the cybertron and have weapons. It main function is to replace soliders in the feild while at the same time having wireless direct control over ground and air ordinances so as to make split second decisions under pressure. Technus would override it by taking the place of the as of yet uninstalled A.I. Unit that would give the android access to the human emotional spectrum. Technus could then augment the android secretly with customized tech he added and use it to attempt to destroy team phantom for sending him ricocheting endlessly through the Internet an thwarting his take over of the cybertron mainframe. Which still plans to due by assimilating its control matrix into the androids body.
How does that sound?
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Well, it's an interesting idea. I just don't see the military being so foolish as to put all military control in the hands of an artificial intelligence that could turn on them if it chose to. Have the Terminator and the Matrix taught these people nothing?!
Seriously, though, it's definitely a thought. It could even be surmised that Technus came to discover the existence of such a project through what fragments of information he was able to gather after blasting through the internet for so long. I just think we may need to tweak it a bit so it seems a little more...I don't know, I guess I would say "realistic", for lack of a better term. We'd also need to come up with a way for Team Phantom to stop Technus once he gets to this point.
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