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.ever thicker fluid. response.
flesh moistens flesh. preperation.
orbs cover over. inhale.
cords stretch/contract. release.
vibrations touch nerves. contact.
slides deny light. expectation.
familar sounds approach. warmth.
lungs ease breath. exhale.
center warms over. love.
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i want to drown in your love.
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until we are together. you'll be in my thoughts and dreams. i shall wait until the day we can hold each other forever.
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Comments: 27
battlecattattoo [2004-06-09 01:31:11 +0000 UTC]
great!!!! not much else to say..... its alredy been said
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champion-of-idiots [2004-06-01 04:54:32 +0000 UTC]
i like it. personally. it's a little bit too gritty to decipher, but i gather that was the point.
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rottingangel [2004-05-16 00:05:11 +0000 UTC]
Do you mind if I use this for the Display Picture to a short story I plan on submitting?
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schitz011 [2004-05-14 11:03:28 +0000 UTC]
Very nice work, reminds me of Dwayne Arbus (I think?) what is the story you are trying to tell here?
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xxsqueekbatxx [2004-05-14 04:46:50 +0000 UTC]
<3 this is beautiful. I love the shot of just the cigarette in your hand.
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littlecat [2004-05-13 17:47:58 +0000 UTC]
This piece would've been better if it had only consisted of the last one, the first two don't match the last. It's just too much. But pretty text and such. What does it say?
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kamlii [2004-05-13 14:27:20 +0000 UTC]
your/work/makes/me/forget/to/breathe/som etimes.
beautiful.
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chaosmuse [2004-05-13 14:02:18 +0000 UTC]
who is still feeling it will soon die. my wife is...
what does the rest say? you've got me curious.
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batness [2004-05-13 13:18:29 +0000 UTC]
"until we are together. you'll be in my thoughts and dreams. i shall wait until the day we can hold each other forever." <--did you write that? *sigh* makes me miss Graham....very very beautiful, I love the sketch cursive-ish font in the background, and how you can never really see your face...
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