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Published: 2005-03-19 05:43:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 182; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Everyday.

Sun is rising on, at the end of the road.
My eyes gaze and the light pierces me.
I attempt to capture a feeling from your vacant face,
But again your feelings have fooled me.
What use is a key, when it doesn’t open a door?
You said being myself was the way to open you.
But you’re standing strong and looking away.
Sometimes I question why I bother anymore.
I remember when it was simple.
A kiss is all I would need.
But I’m deeper now.
A handful of heavy words is what I require to proceed.
Through this life of reeds I riddle.
I’m playing catch with my hopes and dreams and I’m all wrapped up in the middle.
With your lips pouted and your hips posed out.
Running your hands through your perfect hair and through your perfect hair throughout.
I’m denied again.
Let down.
I’m shut out.
O when the rain falls on me.
The rain It does fall hard.
And for every night I spend lonely.
Is another one lost in tears, just another battle scar.

Will you ever understand?

Your words are more than letters to me.
A power, a strength, your words mean the world to me.
But you’re careless.
You trip over yourself constantly.
You never see your mistakes.
I’m under your nose, and you’re looking at the horizon.
Waiting for another one to come and hurt you.
Blatantly waiting for another mistake.

My heart drips a fluid you’ve never seen.
My eyes see, visions you’ll never see.
It’s so simple. But so hard to understand.
That I see, sleep, dream, hope that one day I’ll be your man.


I’m chasing butterflies again.
And my heart is all excited.
Until I die across his wrist in marker pen
I’ll chase forever the butterflies of you.


Into the darkness I’ll wander, into the woods I’ll play.untill the very end of time I could
Fall for you.
Because I fall everyday.
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Comments: 6

Andilwen-Illiana [2005-04-06 02:46:34 +0000 UTC]

Good ending especially. A nice poem, and you were right about the ease of relating to it.
I think here:
My heart drips a fluid you’ve never seen.
My eyes see, visions you’ll never see.
It’s so simple. But so hard to understand.
That I see, sleep, dream, hope that one day I’ll be your man.

You could replace some of the 'see's. I don't like giving specific alternatives, I know I can't rewrite people's poems for them, but it's just a general idea.

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crookedjon [2005-03-28 22:08:29 +0000 UTC]

I think everybody has been there at some point
Crooky like

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JFMuni [2005-03-21 18:38:34 +0000 UTC]

awww i can definitely relate to this one..

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bemybaby [2005-03-19 17:43:17 +0000 UTC]

"Your words are more than letters to me.
A power, a strength, your words mean the world to me.
But you’re careless.
You trip over yourself constantly."

i love those lines for some reason... the way it sounds like you care and adore someones flaws- i can relate to that

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grimdiskord [2005-03-19 16:31:11 +0000 UTC]

been there before man nice work as always keep it up


klubs i kreate kaos with


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TheSp00n [2005-03-19 12:28:06 +0000 UTC]

very good again

"Fall for you.
Because I fall everyday."
know the feeling it sucks


v well written (do i even need to say that? )
good work

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