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unknownemo — Is this proof enough?
Published: 2006-03-23 18:15:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 44; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Mountains's tumble, in the distance.
Waves are roaring, on the shore.
forests of green, set a-flame.
I ask: 'do you want to see more'

Cities fall like rock to the ground.
Poeple burn, and break.
The world stops, until you say go.
I ask: 'what else would it take?'

Plantlife and wildlife, are extinct.
The summer air is blue.
The red hot sun, has Shriveled away
i ask: 'is this proof enough, that i love you'
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unknownemo - don't you weep
Comments: 2

TheSp00n [2006-04-01 20:30:53 +0000 UTC]

know the feeling, sometimes nothing is enough

really like this one, your rhyming somehow gets better and better lol

"The summer air is blue." love this image, so refreshing and tranquil

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Andilwen-Illiana [2006-03-25 04:10:01 +0000 UTC]

You should try rhyme more often.

I really like this, particularly the introductory stanza.

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