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Published: 2005-03-18 17:59:32 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 3
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Description Funny isn't it?
How sometimes when the sun goes down.The sky stays lit.
Or when there is no wind nor breeze,yet i see the top of the trees swaying like an audience to a touching song.

Sometimes i'm lost. Sometimes my fingertips pass through panes' of glass,when my mind is somewhere else and my heart's set on the task.
I can do anything when i try.
I could grab that moon and bring it to you, and make your heart beat real fast.
I can make you blush,and make you feel like a nothing else.

I can feel your eyes choosing me.
I plan what i want when i talk to myself.
You might laugh at what i am.
But lets take a look at us now.
You can barely stand, your face is nothing.
I shine through. I shine on.
I'll pick you up and take you to where you want to be.
If you don't come now, you'll turn around and notice i'll be gone.
Like a heartbeat.

Sometimes it gets lonely.
Being the best around and all.
Just by reading a line out of your eyes.
I could tell your rise and fall...
you're so predictable, but my heart beats to you.
You're one in a million, but my soul is undecided on what to choose.
My mind can usually see through anything.
But it's having problems here.
I'm stuck, i can't figure out what you are.
An obsticle?
I can't risk my happiness on you.
But will i regret it soon enough?
Maybe....
Just maybe i'll let you stay for a while longer.

...I watch your world turn around.
While you wonder inside your head.
Your eyes and closed and your breath is soft.
I laid your soul to sleep on your bed. and now your restless.
I held your face, when you kissed me for the last time.
Your skin is dying, because it breathes me in.
And just like the horizon.
You'll never be able to catch me
Could you catch me when i tremble like a elephant being murdered for it's ivory.
I get hunted everyday.
By the jealous ones'.
They hate what i do.
What i do to you.
Make you feel like a diamond.
Like hunter's they will chase me down,
like a beautiful stallion I'll be captured.
Locked in my empty room again, my soul will die out again.
But the fire of my heart will burn on.
Like the sun.
I'llburn on.

That's what you said you loved me for.
My heart.
it's big and bright and It beats for you.

It always will..


So if you find me gone one day.
And if the skies are red.
Just look inside and feel me.
Because our memories will never be dead.
Sometimes.I findit funny. When i don't love you.But your face neverleaves me.
Whyareyou still around?
I'll flick these brown pages over to the end.
The ending is unclear.
I turn around and tremble.
Because it's so dark i bite my lip
There's nothing but my diary.
I'll choose this ending.
I'll paint your picture, with my words,and make your smile shine.
I'm a poet forever, and nothing will change the way you used to be mine.
See this story ending?
My pen is running dry.
I'll leave you on a cliff hanger.
Because i don't think you deserve to be mine.

again.




I still see you around with your loverboy.
Secondplace you said he was.
Enough words to fill a dictionary.
Was the length of your plead...you begged me while he waited for you.
You begged me, while he loved you.

have somerespect.         
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Comments: 3

Andilwen-Illiana [2005-08-31 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Hooray! A poem that actually tells a story and isn't just a collection of words like so many of them are. I think this is very well-written, even if I did have to read it like 4 times to understand all of it.

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shakeyjake [2005-03-21 16:27:34 +0000 UTC]

tis a very good piece!! you do emo very proud!

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TheSp00n [2005-03-19 12:19:05 +0000 UTC]

i really associate will all your poems but especialy this one, i completely understand what your saying

"Funny isn't it?
How sometimes when the sun goes down.The sky stays lit.
Or when there is no wind nor breeze,yet i see the top of the trees swaying like an audience to a touching song."
this is a brilliant opening, the laid back first line works well to communkcate with the reader, and the lines after are very good imagery


great work

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