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vavacung — Chapter 13 : Deus vel machina
Published: 2013-10-31 07:28:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 69184; Favourites: 427; Downloads: 282
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To Love owner : Ruler is a tool of people, isn't it?The ruler seem like to be the leader of all people.
The ruler seem like to be the owner of all people.
But if you looked it in reverse view. Ruler was just a tool of people.
Ruler was a servant of people. Ruler had a duty to take care their kingdom. Protect their city. Solve every problem for them.
Ruler was not a owner....Ruler was just a loyal servant of all people.
Just like a machine....But ruler was a creature too....Ruler was a creature who have heart...Ruler was a creature who could love and hurt....
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The Hillarious bit is just how well the Horus Heresy fits with the established background of MLP.
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It's a really cool story!
In addition, I think your artwork is improved better and better.
(Keep following)
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Every update makes is so awesome, and each is getting more awesome than the last!
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Okay now this one is very important to remember and the reason why I side with Celestia.
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The more i read this comic, the more i love this comic.
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there are many grammar errors here, if you want I can correct them, despite that it's incredible well drawn and I really like the story so far, it's quite realistic that this would have happened to the princess once in her lifetime at least.
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I have my own English Editor. Don't worry. This page I just try to do it by myself. To train myself. I spend half of day to check and check grammar and English for avoid any error.
But look like it's waste my time...I can't be good with English no matter how hard I learn about it....
I should die and reborn again in country that use English as their main language....Damn....Why I born in Thailand!!
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dont worry, i was born in america and grammar is kind of a crappy part for me.
all i can recommend to you is learn what words sound like and write with the sound it out method, watch some english tv, and try to write your sentences how they sound instead of right.
the important thing is getting the message across and grammar is a FAR second place to that. granted there are some douches who learn the grammar perfectly and call people out on every mistake, but noone really likes them anyway, its why they are called grammar-nazis.
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i was born in England, practically has English in the name. and i suck at English, its a horrid language that just a mesh of other languages. im dyslexic so im already bad at grammar and spelling, but English makes it worse.
anyway, loving the comic i dont care about the grammar the art and story compensate for it easly.
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don't worry you will learn it eventually, I was not born in an english country either.
I spend half of a day to check and check the grammar to avoid any errors
But looks like it's a waste of my time...
and so on. just little mistakes
though I like this broken english, it sounds cute xD
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