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vavacung — Crazy Future Part 51
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Published: 2014-12-27 15:05:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 65434; Favourites: 544; Downloads: 264
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"You're stolen my first kiss!!!"Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy. *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 469
guess that makes sense.she also acted very much like a child when she was excited about sleeping in the castle.
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you just read alters sentences in Mordin Solus' voice..........
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Shit, youre right xD sounds exactly like mordin and you think in his voice^^
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and the new candidate for alters father is:
Mordin Solus XD
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heavy: you are dead not big suprise
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BURN HIM MAKE YOU DADDY PROUD AND MAKE HIS LIFE A NIGHTMARE LIKE YOUR MOM !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I will help you for the .
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Wait, how does he know that a dragon's kiss tastes spicy?....Guess he kissed plenty of dragons as well as mares.
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Collector through and through
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Wonder how many times he got slapped or clawed from his 'collecting'...though being a prince might have given him some diplomatic immunity.
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Diplomatic immunity only works sowell
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Hmm, the immunity thing would probably only work on legal issues, not personal stuff and being kissed without warning is definitely quite personal, as demonstrated here. Hopefully, Alternate Dawn is good at running away...and evading fireballs, provided she can breathe fire.
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working on my own design of a ponydragon culture to put in my ponyverse. my sona dirge is getting redesigned into one the breed.
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Hmm, I've been hearing bits and pieces of your sona but I don't have a clear picture of it in my head.
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well i have multiple oc's but my sona is a work in progress. his personality is working its way out and his looks are coming along. its not a finished product yet but he is going to be what im calling a dracosteed. which is a unique pony dragon breed from a northern continent with some rather unquie traits.
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Ah, I see. Well, I look forward to the day that your sona is complete so I can see 'Dirge' for myself
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i can show you a prototype picture of him. im working out the kinks of his country and homeland (i like world building so im going to flesh out his homeland and soon something for my oc sanguines country.)
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Ooh, so you do world building as well. I love stories that have their own little histories and background.
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world building is my favorite part of writing. like sanguine is the leader of a country called the soverignty and its an economic and political powerhouse despite it being a small country. Her rivalry with celestia sets up alot of interesting things. But me and my friend have stuff like primordials of the world thought up, various countries and how they view and interact with each other and equestria. As well as stories not even mlp related.
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Marshmallows with hot sauce..... Sounds good
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Run, boy. Run as if your life depends on it.
Which, in fact, is the case...
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Yeap it is time to run because if you don't Twilight might be without a son soon lol
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And now it's a good time to run for dear life.
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Just get the knife, sacrificial alter is ready
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Things just got real dark with you, eh?
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Oh, then I might have need of your services in the future. One of the collaborators I work with seems to be quite good with writing gore, though he sometimes goes overboard and I'll have to tone it down at times.
p.s:How are you with sci-fi?
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setting I work in is usually magitech so I'm versed.
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Hmm, why don't you give the story a look and tell me what you think. www.fimfiction.net/story/10125…
Mind you, the story originally belonged to another writer who died last year. We're only continuing where he left off so there might be differences in styles later on.
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okay just looking at the cover art this is a pony starcraft crossover isn't it?
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the protoss blade and firebat suit was a give away
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Actually, it's the Reaper armor from Starcraft 2
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my mistake sorry. been a while sense i played
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No worries, I made the same mistake the first time I saw it too, until i saw the guns that is.
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Firebats were just very iconic but im a zerg overlord myself
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I almost forgot to ask, but have you read the story yet? If so, what do you think of it? I'd really like to hear your opinion of it.
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im working my way through it bit by bit there is alot of it after all.
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Oh, sorry, I keep forgetting how long the story is lately. Just so you know, my fimfiction name is Not so New Brony.
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In the last one he something about...collection...
Perhaps he meant unique pony tastes....WTF Alternate Dawn, that's some kinky shit right there
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It's hard to think that THIS stallion is Twilight's son xD
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He got it from his father.
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well dawn, you are going to freaking die
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