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Published: 2015-04-25 11:15:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 77902; Favourites: 748; Downloads: 247
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"Mission failed..." - Super SurpriseShipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)
Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…
Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.
Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.
Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*
If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…
English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/
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Comments: 242
Marauder92 In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 12:19:32 +0000 UTC]
Ow, that must be an hard blow for Surprise...
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anideterm3 In reply to Marauder92 [2015-04-25 12:28:31 +0000 UTC]
She'll probably try to surprise them more to make up for it.
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Marauder92 In reply to anideterm3 [2015-04-25 12:58:34 +0000 UTC]
... That'll end either with huge scares for them or other depressions for her.
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anideterm3 In reply to Marauder92 [2015-04-25 13:27:43 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry she always tries to do it for fun on both sides. Rarity and Spike understands that i'm sure.
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Marauder92 In reply to anideterm3 [2015-04-25 13:51:09 +0000 UTC]
We'll see. Probably you're right...
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firecharge44371 In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 12:12:00 +0000 UTC]
Wow, a lot of effort was placed into the expressions
but who cares
anime style!!
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CraftyMaelyss In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 11:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Poor Surprise, they couldn't just play along
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anideterm3 In reply to CraftyMaelyss [2015-04-25 12:18:22 +0000 UTC]
Surprise could probably see through them if they tried to fake it.
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CraftyMaelyss In reply to anideterm3 [2015-04-25 12:50:35 +0000 UTC]
I suppose it's better to be genuine then XD
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anideterm3 In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 11:50:25 +0000 UTC]
I just realized, after Rarity, Sparity, and Spike get a share of marshmallows Super Surprise may start eating the rest like comfort food for failing the surprise. In which they may protest to Super Surprise to save some for the others.
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MagicaITrevor In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 11:49:47 +0000 UTC]
I don't think we say this enough, but their expressions are perfect! You do an amazing job at displaying emotion. X3
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anideterm3 In reply to cyberpyro59 [2015-04-25 11:48:55 +0000 UTC]
If you read earlier pages you would know and they have their kid named Sparity (Spike named her).
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cyberpyro59 In reply to anideterm3 [2015-04-25 11:55:57 +0000 UTC]
Ohh Thx I dind't check the other pics xP also Cool
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anideterm3 In reply to cyberpyro59 [2015-04-25 12:16:09 +0000 UTC]
Well when Twilight and Rarity talked about it it sounded like the name was cheesy but way to make up for giving birth to a already decided gender in exchange for bringing Rarity back to life as a Nightmare to be with Spike more. Deal was done with Nightmare's Spirit because she wanted to have the joy of being loved with family (mostly I think) and friends so she would within Sparity as a kind of reincarnation.
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anideterm3 In reply to fusionguybrony [2015-04-25 11:35:59 +0000 UTC]
Time for a comfort talk. Also and so after comfort talk will be some interactions between the party guests, guests of honor, and party prepers. Rarity and Marshmellow should be of best interst plus Sparity with Super Surprise and Eden. And we'll soon see hopefully who else will attend the party. Aerial Ace will probably fly in, Alternate Dawn and Selene may reluctantly join from wanting to focus on work if somepony (like maybe Twilight) gets them to come, Twilight probably walked the family to the house and joins (I wonder if her dancing is still bad as I remember from the show XD *lol*), and Little Aj probably wanted to focus on patrol and training when somepony (like Aerial Ace maybe) drags her to the party for some relaxation.
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Drakenhof [2015-04-25 11:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Two of them already knew you great-great-grandmother. Sorry, Surprise xD
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anideterm3 In reply to Drakenhof [2015-04-25 11:26:26 +0000 UTC]
And they especially Rarity probably told the third about great great grandmother Pinkie and also her encounter with you in town.
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anideterm3 [2015-04-25 11:20:58 +0000 UTC]
Oh well there is still the party and you can try surprising them another time to make up for it. Plus you did surprise Rarity earlier. So please cheer up Super Surprise. Also in case any of you are wondering how Sparity can see in the dark, when she has her glasses off she can see heat like infrared vision/goggles and her glasses allow her to see normally though I don't know if her dragon form also allows her to see normally without her glasses.
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double-ZR-tap [2015-04-25 11:19:16 +0000 UTC]
The dragon family is not impress.... -.- also Spike is huge 0.0
I just noutest that Eden is scared.
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anideterm3 In reply to double-ZR-tap [2015-04-25 11:29:01 +0000 UTC]
I think they are still happy about the party with the smiles on their faces.
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double-ZR-tap In reply to anideterm3 [2015-04-25 11:31:43 +0000 UTC]
The only one that is not so happy is Eden, the poor thing is scared
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anideterm3 In reply to double-ZR-tap [2015-04-25 11:34:42 +0000 UTC]
Initially it is probably the noise from the party popper. And probably didn't get a good look at Spike yet. She might get a little scared at first but she'll adjust and get over it. Plus she already met Rarity and isn't so scared anymore now she knows she is alive and not a ghost.
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anideterm3 In reply to Al-Kpon [2015-04-25 11:30:25 +0000 UTC]
At least one factor is all it can take to ruin a surprise for an individual or two.
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anideterm3 In reply to Flower-Dash [2015-04-25 11:27:50 +0000 UTC]
At least they have smiles on their faces for the party I think when they came in.
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SnoopyStallion In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 11:17:23 +0000 UTC]
lol XD so much for the suprise factor lol XD
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AnonimowyBrony In reply to ??? [2015-04-25 11:16:15 +0000 UTC]
Suprise failed ;-; Yay second view!
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