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Published: 2015-05-03 15:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129962; Favourites: 982; Downloads: 318
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Description "Welcome home, sister" - Sweetie Belle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is the end of episode.

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#Previous Crazy Future Part 97
#NextChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
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Comments: 576

shinigamisparda In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:52:16 +0000 UTC]

Wait, what!? You're ending it here!?

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alexandremilo123 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:44:25 +0000 UTC]

more plizzzzzzzzzzz

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ThePhoenixKing32 In reply to alexandremilo123 [2015-05-03 21:53:02 +0000 UTC]

AGREED!!!

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AJE1233 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:31:19 +0000 UTC]

That ended... suddenly.

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marywink In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:27:54 +0000 UTC]

MORE OH GOD PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Backjack-Kitsune In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:19:14 +0000 UTC]

... how dare you tease us .... but I guess I'll wait

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SteGhost In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:12:29 +0000 UTC]

Noooo this is the end!
But, YEEEAH, there will be a sequel!!   

Bravo, Vavacung. Bravissimo           

You are brilliant. You wrote a story full of elements that NO ONE could have seen coming in any way!

Thanks for having entertain me with your amazing story!
Can't wait for the sequel, Chaos Future!


P.S. I saw on derpibooru that you said that Crazy Future is just "Episode 1" of your series............................ YES!!!!!

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masternoble56 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:06:37 +0000 UTC]

Why the massive cliffhanger. That isn't even funny.

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ShinjiHHHLee [2015-05-03 21:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Nooo, why this cliffhanger???? T_T

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HansRod In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:05:45 +0000 UTC]

Good Work, Vavacung! You shall rest, you earn it!

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Brony-likes-muffins In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 21:01:08 +0000 UTC]

Ur teasin us so bad that it aint even funny.

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Equeto In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:58:15 +0000 UTC]

Spoiler CHAOS FUTURE: This Sweetie Belle is in reality Sweetie Bot in a diguise of the real one, and as the counterpart of Ultron       in this universe she is preparing the extinction of all the organic forms of life...... Only the "NEW MANE  SIX"       could stop her with the help of Serene and some friends of another fanverses (Nix, Pandora, Starbust.....!

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Spydol In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:51:31 +0000 UTC]

Simply wonderful and lovely ending. Another beautiful episode, thank you. ^^
Chaos future? I can't wait to see it.

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Doroc0 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:46:12 +0000 UTC]

How  soon is this "coming soon"?

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Triduo In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:43:23 +0000 UTC]

I don't know if I'm the only one to say that but...

Did somepony notice how the hay it's possible to burn apple juice...

With a bucking mixer ?

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Nikary In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Wha... that's it? o.o

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Dynamo-Clan In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:31:11 +0000 UTC]

Eternal Fire: It's better that Chaos Future comes out very soon!

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Daiskida In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:26:30 +0000 UTC]

Really? So let's run this down: We get introduced a bunch of characters who barely get any development or don't get any development at all (and AJ 2.0 is just a collection of Shonen cliches), barely anything gets explained to us of this so called future, and majority of the comic is just one reference after another or just jokes that don't work.

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TheWrathOfPurple In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:24:38 +0000 UTC]

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

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Peni-Hearts-Make-Art In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:23:28 +0000 UTC]

FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-

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SirArtanis7 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 20:04:08 +0000 UTC]

What!? You end on a cliff hanger? I at least want an ominous b.s. thing where someone says "it seems like everything is going to be JUST FINE" and in another panel there's a dark a mysterious figure. cause now I just want to hear the conversation at the beginning of the next chapter... issue?...series?... what ever this technically is.

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dyeingmoon In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:58:25 +0000 UTC]

this caused me to take a sword to the heart.

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DragonLad1 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:57:30 +0000 UTC]

Can't wait for the sequel

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AJR001 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:55:01 +0000 UTC]

Awww, but I still hate cliffhangers...

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Ichimanzu In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:54:12 +0000 UTC]

...eh? This ending... Just like the whole series, unexpected.

Looks like Sweetie Belle is a ghost :3

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clockworkeye123 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:45:14 +0000 UTC]

words, that's all I can say, for I have none that can describe the emotions I have now to quell after this ordeal, thank you vanacung, for not only giving us an ending that will piss off many, but an ending that will keep many more begging for the next hearty meal that is the art you give to us, thank you

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TwentyFold8 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:41:57 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, WHY YOU DO THIS?!?!?!  ERMIGERD!!!!  GAH, ONE OF MY FAVORITE COMICS THAT I HAVE BEEN FOLLOWING FOR ALL THE RIGHT REASONS DOES THIS TO ME, WHY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I MUST READ THE SEQUEL, MUUUUUUUUUUUUUUST~!|!!!

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lula77 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:41:03 +0000 UTC]

WAIT. THERE´S MORE? NEED MORE. 

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sapphire475gs In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:35:37 +0000 UTC]

I would be on the edge of laughter if the line were: "Seems I'll never get a cutie mark for cooking".

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Mike-the-Vector In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:34:41 +0000 UTC]

!!!

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DerpyBronyman In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:34:23 +0000 UTC]

Ending it again, why? I want to see her now.

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megaxpower In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:30:56 +0000 UTC]

best ending ever dude

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typicaltom In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:27:30 +0000 UTC]

did she attach her soul to a kin tree?

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AeroAceSpades In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:26:29 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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Bronydude777 [2015-05-03 19:18:34 +0000 UTC]

Wait if she's alive then who's tombstone is that at the beginning with her name on it?

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HansRod In reply to Bronydude777 [2015-05-03 21:08:39 +0000 UTC]

Maybe her daughter or she herself became immortal at her own.

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Bronydude777 In reply to HansRod [2015-05-03 21:10:24 +0000 UTC]

I'm going with her daughter.

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willo3 In reply to Bronydude777 [2015-05-03 20:04:40 +0000 UTC]

Good question

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Bronydude777 In reply to willo3 [2015-05-03 20:18:26 +0000 UTC]

There's also the fact that on the time line page it says the CMC all died at different points.

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SaefouAneira [2015-05-03 19:18:30 +0000 UTC]

What The end? D:

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badrang22 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:14:33 +0000 UTC]

omg I want the sequel NOW!!!!!

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ShadowRater1 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:14:15 +0000 UTC]

the greatest moment is when you see a pony you haven't seen in years...or centuries. 

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Sielent-Brat In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:08:26 +0000 UTC]

Quite suddenly o_O

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thasbrony In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:07:54 +0000 UTC]

ending... did not ses that comming

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Krisisis In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:07:27 +0000 UTC]

nice, thx for the comic! Enjoyed a lot!

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Skunkplush In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:06:20 +0000 UTC]

*flails* no faaaair!!! D:

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Ruzzarabbit2 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:06:15 +0000 UTC]

will she have one of the card IDs too?

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MrOmg82 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:03:12 +0000 UTC]

"Warning : This is the end of episode." It meas, you are going to animate this? xD
PS. "Chaos future"... So, where is Discord?

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JuMiKu In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Sweetiebot in 3...2...1...

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ObsiKyfimic In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 19:01:25 +0000 UTC]

NUUU! THE ENDING T_T

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