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Published: 2015-05-03 15:09:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 129971; Favourites: 982; Downloads: 318
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Description "Welcome home, sister" - Sweetie Belle

Shipping and Descendant Warning :
Spike X Rarity(Nightmare pony) = Sparity(Daughter)
Pinkie Pie X ??? = Super Surprise(Descendant)
(Spifire X Soarin) X (Daring Do X Ahuizotl) = Aerial Ace(Descendant)
Big Macintosh X Fluttershy = Apple Eden (Descendant)
Twilight Sparkle X -- Top Secret -- = Alternate Dawn(Son)
Applejack X ??? = Little AJ (Daughter)

Alternate Dawn Card Collection => vavacung.deviantart.com/galler…

Warning : This story takes place 100 years after Rarity dead. This story base on season 4. So anything that happened in season 5 will have nothing to do with this story.

Warning : This story's an alternate universe and is really crazy at times. Futa-spell or the magic that can make female pony impregnate another female pony doesn't exist.

Warning : a lot of 4th wall breaking and referencing. Sharing universe with "To Love God - To Love Mortal" but in the future and more crazy(and the crazy will be double by now). *You don't need to read "To Love God - To Love Mortal" to understand this story. It's just have many Easter egg for that story here.*

Warning : This is the end of episode.

If you confused about chronology of this story, You can watch this timeline to help you => vavacung.deviantart.com/art/Cr…

English Editor : dracoblair.deviantart.com/

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#FirstCrazy Future Part 01
#Previous Crazy Future Part 97
#NextChaos Future 01 : Sweetie Belle
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Comments: 576

Killbeat In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:22:36 +0000 UTC]

what?! Is that a joke?!

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SnowyLilacs In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:22:23 +0000 UTC]

hehe she still burnt the orange juice even after all these years,cute idea to include that. 

Can't wait to see Chaos Future...and I wonder if Sweetie Belle became like Rarity in the form of Nightmare Sweetie Belle?

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TerraHv1 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:21:11 +0000 UTC]

You're just mean...

Also... How do you burn apple juice in a blender? XD

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double-ZR-tap In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:19:34 +0000 UTC]

I am just going to say "!"

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Houkou-Seal In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:08:02 +0000 UTC]

Omg, the feels! ;^;
I will be waiting for the sequel! x3

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DarylChin In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:07:48 +0000 UTC]

Great work. And smart choice on the ending.

You got people wanting to know how Sweetie Belle looked like after all these years, effectively having them wanting to see more of your works.

Kudos to you!

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SeerSGB In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:04:34 +0000 UTC]

Well that has a bit of ominous feel to it, doesn't it.

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Dragondash98 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 17:04:30 +0000 UTC]

NO! NO YOU CAN'T END IT LIKE THIS!

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sokesamurai [2015-05-03 17:03:59 +0000 UTC]

That ending... it's doing something to my heart, it's so bittersweet. 

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Hotspot-the-626th In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:59:07 +0000 UTC]

Aww, man. We didn't get to see Grandma Sweetie Bell

Great series! I can't wait for the sequel!

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MadDiscordia410 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:52:54 +0000 UTC]

T-T  This comic is beautiful 

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MadCrow553 In reply to MadDiscordia410 [2015-05-03 17:03:10 +0000 UTC]

Couldn't agree more! it's so beautiful.  

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MadDiscordia410 In reply to MadCrow553 [2015-05-03 18:27:38 +0000 UTC]

 yup

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Starrunner45 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:50:43 +0000 UTC]

SERIOUSLY, NO YOU CANT END IT LIKE THIS T_T

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DarylChin In reply to Starrunner45 [2015-05-03 17:04:12 +0000 UTC]

That's the whole purpose.

A cliffanger garners 20% more viewers.

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kysoshadowblast In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:46:22 +0000 UTC]

NOOOO I GOTTA KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!!!

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Aiclo In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:45:00 +0000 UTC]

  

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Wolfspirit7295 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:40:59 +0000 UTC]

Still manages to burn juice 😅

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Raykiller567 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:40:54 +0000 UTC]

something , inside my heart make boom 

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crazyseandx In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:39:11 +0000 UTC]

Didn't expect an ending, but it's feelsworthy.

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GraphiteDoodlePearl In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:37:38 +0000 UTC]

She got to see her sister again! yay!!!  

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Squeebun In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:37:02 +0000 UTC]

No no no no no no Why on such a note. I mean its a good note but till. NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

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sweetymimy22 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:36:27 +0000 UTC]

wait that's it or is there another chaper

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vavacung In reply to sweetymimy22 [2015-05-03 18:16:45 +0000 UTC]

This is just episode 1 of my series....

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TARDISpony101 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:35:51 +0000 UTC]

NO!!! NOT THE END!!   

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mimidino123 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:35:30 +0000 UTC]

Ho man if i can't see the sequel fast enough... i think i'm gonna die !!!!! Help me, PLEEEAAAAAAAAASE!!!!!!

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XxWing-SzexX In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:34:32 +0000 UTC]

So sad :,D

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Doughnutdenyit In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:32:53 +0000 UTC]

The suspense is going to kill me

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double-ZR-tap In reply to Doughnutdenyit [2015-05-03 17:18:00 +0000 UTC]

Not just you, but all of us. The suspense is com after us all, and it's taking no prisoners.

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ilustraciongalletita In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:31:18 +0000 UTC]

no! i want more of this comic QAQ

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TenShine1Production In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:31:03 +0000 UTC]

No no no no!!! Why does it end!?!

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Ziuk1990 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:30:22 +0000 UTC]

:iconsweetieohcomeonplz: OH COME ON! NOT A CLIFFHANGER! NOT NOW!!!

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R-Doll In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:30:10 +0000 UTC]

You definitely have amazed me with this comic's style, story, and characters. This "Crazy Future" is interesting. I've enjoyed reading this MLP fan, web-comic greatly.

Fantastic work. I look forward to the sequel along with any other MLP comic/art you might do.   

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DaWuulfsDen In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:28:21 +0000 UTC]

im not going to cry...im not going to cry...im not going to cry... -tears up-

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MoonSpaghetti [2015-05-03 16:26:28 +0000 UTC]

Aw 
Not as amazing as I hoped

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Metaruu In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:19:24 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was amazing!!
I really can't wait for Chaos Future!

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TheMystics11 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:18:57 +0000 UTC]

0-0 not going to freak out..

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emailed333 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:16:41 +0000 UTC]

AWESOME story. Can't wait for the next episode!

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McCoda In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:14:16 +0000 UTC]

So... Did Sweety Belle make a nightmare pact as well? 

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ITOS [2015-05-03 16:02:15 +0000 UTC]

I'm also a bit surprised at the sudden end. You have set up a lot of characters and stories in this new world. Still, on it's own it has been very enjoyable so thank you for sharing it with us!

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Bronydude777 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 16:01:11 +0000 UTC]

Well played

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Cheschire-Kaat In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 15:57:10 +0000 UTC]

will you really make a next one?

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rustymecha In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 15:56:24 +0000 UTC]

It's just another beginning

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Blue-Moon-Arts64 In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 15:54:56 +0000 UTC]

Oh man what an ending I can't wait for the next one XD

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Chiro-Bat In reply to ??? [2015-05-03 15:54:51 +0000 UTC]

ummmm.....what? I realize there's a sequel coming, but things just barely started happening. A good story has a beginning and an end...this was just one giant beginning. For having nearly 100 parts, all that happened was characters being introduced. You started strong and introduced an extremely well thought out, fleshed story with everything going for it. You built a world that could carry a story for 1000+ parts easily, with a new mane 6, new way of harnessing the elements (which, by the way, haven't even been all shown yet), and a very interesting plot to boot. To drop it like this, to me, is a sign of giving up, despite the fact that a "sequel" is coming. In real terms, there has been no story yet, no arch of events, no climax, nothing. This has been one extremely long prequel, and even now it's not over. I'm disappointed slightly...

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MermaidWitch94 In reply to Chiro-Bat [2015-05-03 17:13:15 +0000 UTC]

^^THIS.

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McCoda In reply to Chiro-Bat [2015-05-03 16:27:42 +0000 UTC]

And let's not forget about what happened to Nightmare Moon's character between To Love God and Crazy Future. According to the timeline she was sent back to the moon by Celestia, but in Ponyville's town square we can see a statue of her in battle armor. (suggesting she hasn't fallen to darkness again and is well respected) That's also another point in this universe I'd like to know more about. Did she sacrifice herself to stop some unknown force, leave under her own volition, build a new colony, or did Celestia started a zelus crusade against nightmare ponies in general (hence the secrecy around Rarity's status)?

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vavacung In reply to Chiro-Bat [2015-05-03 16:10:02 +0000 UTC]

This is just episode 1....

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MermaidWitch94 In reply to vavacung [2015-05-03 17:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Doesn't matter. The story is incomplete.

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vavacung In reply to MermaidWitch94 [2015-05-03 18:17:30 +0000 UTC]

What is complete in your mind?

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