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Velink β Pokemon J.A.L. Prolog redo1
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Published: 2012-09-25 18:05:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 13453; Favourites: 82; Downloads: 10
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So I decided to redo the prolog of my main run comic.This is the old version: velink.deviantart.com/art/NUzlβ¦
wonder if I have improved at all.....
I mad another mistake and ended up making similar mistake to my original page.....
Oh well,
since Organization Quantum will be an important element to the main story,
I use this opportunity to remind my reader that the three protagonist of my run are agents of a scientific organization on a mission.
Intro: fav.me/d4mfgpg
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Thanks, glad you think so
I don't think their bg will affect the mains storyline too much tho
so I am making them light and hopefully enjoyable
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what pokemon is next to the totodile? I'm not exactly sure on it.
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Th ene on its right (our right) is a Torchic, and the left one is a Piplup....
.... with mohawk
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ah. sweet. Piplups with mohawks ftw.
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Good job, you improved very much on shading!
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REALLY? thanks so much!
honestly I ma not sure if I have tho
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Of course you improved, silly!
The lineart is better (especially shows in the eyes), there's more shading and the entire page just looks more professional.
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WOw! thanks for pointing all of those!
for some reason my fav is the three pokemons in the last panel...
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Yes, they're great. They have much more details which gives them some personality.
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RENTA: ummmmmm thats look good 
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Thanks, swnd my regards and best wishes to your master
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RENTA:sheΒ΄s sleeping,I will talk her went get up :smoke:
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Nice.
Was thinking about doing something similar with mine as well.
Not redoing the entire thing, but going back and turn my first few chapters digital since the first 7 or 8 are gross and on paper.
Anyway, definite improvement all the colors, lines, and text are all polished. So pretty, Congrats.
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OH thanks!
I'll await yours then XD
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