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Published: 2018-06-28 13:57:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 4791; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 0
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          Maybe if I asked them,
          Politely
          The condition of their 
          Heart
          They wouldn't have
          Left mine
          Aching.

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Comments: 2

Stitchthebest36 [2018-07-01 02:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Very powerful! 

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Gale-OneOfMany [2018-06-30 20:59:17 +0000 UTC]

The visual break between lines really gives this an emotional punch when reading. A heart felt piece that asks a question many have asked themselves in the darkness of the night. I like it, gave me pause after I read it. I appreciate things like that. 

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