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As opposed to the last pic, I tried a thin outline. I think maybe it needs to be a tiny bit thicker, or not there at all.

As for the body shading, I tried to tone it down from the last pic, but it isn't as noticable as I would prefer.

I think the mane-line-dividers look better mixed in like this, as opposed to sprayed on top.

I slacked on the facial features and cutie mark, I'll experiment with those more when I can get the body and hair to not look so mis-matched.

Description
As opposed to the last pic, I tried a thin outline. I think maybe it needs to be a tiny bit thicker, or not there at all.

As for the body shading, I tried to tone it down from the last pic, but it isn't as noticable as I would prefer.

I think the mane-line-dividers look better mixed in like this, as opposed to sprayed on top.

I slacked on the facial features and cutie mark, I'll experiment with those more when I can get the body and hair to not look so mis-matched.