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Published: 2003-10-17 03:23:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 278; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 54
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she's developed a sort of drag to that certain spring in her stepfollowing recommendations and directions of those met along the way
angry with the world based on the fate chosen
idiocy shone through without persuasion
slowly driving regret into angry insanity
happy to bring another soul down with them
communicate raspy information through rancid breathe
words tumble from poisenous tongues, sagging from unclean lips
bait for a girl too naive to see through fabricated smiles missing teeth
her heart too big not to yield her pursuit for each rotting being encountered
wreeking of madness and destruction to charm the sympathetic
cutting off the oxygen formerly known as reality
breathe in the smoke of sin and deceit to feel a rush
lust, greed, and jealousy turning into nothing on their path to fame
too secure with artificial euphoria to turn back and see what she's parting with
heros to retrieve hopeful from the hopeless
ready to strip her of distress and low spirits
and remove the devil's brand from her heavy heart
deveived by love and destroyed by dependency
if only she could give herself a thought.
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Comments: 8
HarleyMace [2004-01-10 07:23:41 +0000 UTC]
reading this reminds me I havent written in so long... and the feelings it evokes... makes me wonder how empty I have become in the lack of written expression...
or what I have forgotten...
I like this... all of your work creates such vivid imagery...
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drd69 [2003-11-06 23:07:29 +0000 UTC]
Going from a sense of clean innocence to a corrupted decay and the hint of back again.
Awesome writing darling.
Give yourself a thought.
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g0deatg0d [2003-10-18 08:41:08 +0000 UTC]
ive always loved your colorful word choice and creative ways to put your ideas. i enjoyed these lines a lot " cutting off the oxygen formerly known as reality
breathe in the smoke of sin and deceit to feel a rush" great job, once again
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shooshooky [2003-10-18 05:05:54 +0000 UTC]
good thing i dont believe anyhting's artificial, it woudl suck if i did.
thinking about this one way gives off a happy mood, thinking about it another way is kindda bummin, very very nice!
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repus [2003-10-17 20:53:55 +0000 UTC]
good, good stuff. you must reach in very deeply and pull your self out. it'll probably hurt, but it's worth every step...
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zaknafein [2003-10-17 06:03:18 +0000 UTC]
That is wonderful..."formerly known as reality", that made me smile so much.... and lots of other verses too that made me realize again how great a poet you are... Remarkable words.
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XxrockgoddessxX [2003-10-17 03:30:29 +0000 UTC]
Wow. This is really good. I like the picture, and especialy the writting! I see you know what your talking about-->
keep it up~
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