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At last, the card I made for her. In fact, why not include the poem I wrote for her too. I hope she doesnt get annoyed with this; although I can't really see why:

Plural not; but singular,
The sweet kernel, that you are.
Your fractions are
Though beautiful still;
Such as described, out,
My head, to this scribbling quill.
Curves; cut out to see
Lustre teeth smiling at me.
Twixt those soft arcs
Twinkle laughter dear;
Whorl round and drip verb
To the circle of my ear.
Reflect refract; sparkle white;
The pure sun off your hair’s delight
To watch.
Stroke the gossamer thread,
That black and fine
Flow soft from your head.
Twin almond spheres, dark but clear;
Draw me inexorably near.
I’m falling in; melting
Perhaps, one might say.
But my goal only now is that;
You’re special to me in every way.

I think it flows quite well and his a little few areas of interest, I'm not all that with poetry really but I do like it as a method for noting ideas. Because my ideas can be so scatty and varied it makes no sense to link them fluidly in prose; but better off in a little bit of a jumble with broken poetry.

If you were wondering; it didn't win her over. I wasnt expecting it to, but I loved her, she deserved it and I enjoyed making it.

Description
At last, the card I made for her. In fact, why not include the poem I wrote for her too. I hope she doesnt get annoyed with this; although I can't really see why:

Plural not; but singular,
The sweet kernel, that you are.
Your fractions are
Though beautiful still;
Such as described, out,
My head, to this scribbling quill.
Curves; cut out to see
Lustre teeth smiling at me.
Twixt those soft arcs
Twinkle laughter dear;
Whorl round and drip verb
To the circle of my ear.
Reflect refract; sparkle white;
The pure sun off your hair’s delight
To watch.
Stroke the gossamer thread,
That black and fine
Flow soft from your head.
Twin almond spheres, dark but clear;
Draw me inexorably near.
I’m falling in; melting
Perhaps, one might say.
But my goal only now is that;
You’re special to me in every way.

I think it flows quite well and his a little few areas of interest, I'm not all that with poetry really but I do like it as a method for noting ideas. Because my ideas can be so scatty and varied it makes no sense to link them fluidly in prose; but better off in a little bit of a jumble with broken poetry.

If you were wondering; it didn't win her over. I wasnt expecting it to, but I loved her, she deserved it and I enjoyed making it.