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whispersfrombelow — running with scissors
Published: 2004-08-27 04:57:21 +0000 UTC; Views: 141; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 7
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Description i dont know who im supposed to be,
or where im supposed to go.
i do know that where ever it is,
im getting there too slow.
i cant read my book of life,
or understand what it means.
im confused about my fantasies,
and why im dying in my dreams.
im drowning as i catch my breath,
and swimming through disease,
ive fallen down, down fallen i have,
wont someone help me please
someone help me please
   help me please.

i dont know who im fighting for,
or where my allegence lies.
i need someone to patch me up,
cause im breaking down inside.
i cant rebuild up by myself,
because to me, i have died.
i hate my thoughts deep in my mind,
and why i havent tried.
i cant see what im running too,
while i'm running in rewind,
please someone come and pick me up,
cause i've gone and left myself behind
gone and left myself behind
   left myself behind.
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Comments: 6

cwedmart [2004-10-24 04:21:17 +0000 UTC]

nice rhyme scheme

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Cklaighe [2004-10-19 09:49:36 +0000 UTC]

*comforts whispersfrombelow*

Genki ne!

It's a very well written piece! I love it!

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QueenMeshi [2004-10-15 03:55:37 +0000 UTC]

wow, I'm breathless aftering having read this. great details in this!

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vinesofsilver [2004-09-18 23:49:33 +0000 UTC]

wow, emotion is well displaye dand while the peice had some angle of confusion, it was still comprehendible, good job!

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Sparklepixie [2004-08-30 08:58:30 +0000 UTC]

Hehe, cute title! Such a feeling of running, of drowning, breathlessness and frustration.

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Richinthought [2004-08-27 18:53:55 +0000 UTC]

wow thats incredibly.. truly *takes his hat of to you*

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