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Published: 2004-09-01 00:34:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 107; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description distance is fascist,
advocating miscommunication
cold, unfeeling greetings and goodbyes
staticsshhhhhhichello, canyouhearme?
(i hear you perfectly, always)

(convict
me of caring;
try and inflict
me with apathy?
your animosity will be evicted
with a cold shoulder)

you and i are derelicts.
we have licked
distance with
closeness of
hearttoheart,
we are a chord
in perfect harmony
rebelling against
the general dissonance
(this is giving for giving,
there is no taking)
i can't see your smile;
but i can feel it.

missing you.
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Comments: 3

Pure-Dax [2005-04-04 17:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Great piece of work, Cred to deviantArt.com

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ifrog [2004-09-01 03:03:36 +0000 UTC]

yeah, this is really damn good. the use of parenthesis, the use of space-less phrases, all of it is excellent.

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bloodandsilver [2004-09-01 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]

that is...incredible. the style and the message...I tend to find myself unimpressed by the writing here but I am in awe. there needs to be more of this. you're fantastic.

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