unrecognisable [2003-07-25 15:09:50 +0000 UTC]

'gets light slowly - save for those' man, those long o vowel sounds do me right in - it's not spaced in such a way that this relation becomes too apparent (a bit bogged down), but it's there and I love it. Good simple true words - like Ernest Hemingway's hangover in Charles Bukowski's head writing this poem down on a matchbook before sun sets.
Waiting like unwanted furniture for the sun to go down or whatever - fucking beautiful. Damn that's some good shit.

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fucklife [2003-06-30 22:02:47 +0000 UTC]

"becoming lost and love by someone else" so tru. ts beautiful!!! definately a favorite of mine!!!!!!!!! this was written along time ago it seems. why dont u do some more submitting? ur a great writer!!

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ndifference [2002-11-21 21:03:20 +0000 UTC]

Short and sweet. You packed a lot into six lines. I'm impressed. I was wondering where you were.

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