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wlop — Chapter 4: Nightmare (Part III)
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|Facebook | Patreon | Tumblr | Twitter | Artstation | Tapastic |New chapter comes, who will the iceprincess choose?
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My Patreon page: www.patreon.com/wlop
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yay an update! lovely as usual, can't wait for the next.
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Can't believe we're only at Ch.5 here feels like it's longer. Lolol ^ - ^
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oh i love this its so awesome cant wait for the next chapter!!
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I love this so much!!!! The art is so beautiful and the storyline is so unique, I cannot wait for more
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Hmmm........ something feels off this time around art wise. Art block? But interested to see what she chooses.
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Your painting style is so unique and awesome that I can't get enough of your art
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he has such a baby face! what a little cutie. every time a new strip comes out, i'm reminded of just how much i LOVE your style
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It doesn't really make sense to me for Ghostblade to leave her, walk away, and act like she's not all that important to him anymore. Wasn't he determined to bring her to Ostin, why give her even the slightest chance to go back?
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Yay finally !
Great job bro this is awesome, keep it up
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Ohhhh does this mean Lenia is finally going to appear in the next chapter? Gosh I'm so freaking excited
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HEY!! YOU DO NOT TALK TO A GIRL LIKE THAT!! INSTEAD, YOU REMIND HER OF SUCKING YOUR D-
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You're painting and your drawing is wonderful!
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I seriously squealed in delight when I saw this in my inbox.
Perfect as ever.
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I don't really like the concept of someone's beauty used as a representation of their purity. Of course, she is showing her kindness to him by untying him (I did like the scene where he was tied, for one, I found it very funny), but essentially, he is just judging her by her beauty. I really do wonder how he would judge her if she was ugly.
And, as we all know, there is no perfect character. But the readers are constantly being shown the image that she is "pure". I don't doubt that she's probably the kindest character in the comic, but I would like to see the more flawed side of her. At most, the only darker side of her we've seen is that helping others heightens her own image of herself. We need more character depth in that direction.
Overall, as of the moment, she is a rather bland character. Of course, it's only chapter 4, so I may be judging it a bit too early, but I thought I'd throw in my own two cents before you start working on future chapters.
The dialogue in this chapter seems more fitting of the setting of the story, so that's a plus, but there appear to be a couple typos.
And though I myself am not exactly sure of how to fix this particular problem, the font of the type and the speech bubbles really clash with the more natural and painty art style.
Very nice art, but could a lot more work in other areas.
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To quote Tv Tropes; "How can you be sure if people like you because you're you, or because you're pretty?"
I can agree, I dont like it either. It give the feeling that only the eyepleasing looking ones are good. But beautiful people can be as cruel as anyone plain or unattracctive.
The concept you mentioned is further discussed on said page
here
What I am also curious about is, will Yan go through a Break the Cutie experience?
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Well, Mars is a kid (at least he looks like it). A child isn't like a more mature person, that judges others by their actions, but rather by their appearance. That's why kids tend to be afraid of "monsters", because of their appearance (or lack therefore), especially because this is the first time that Mars sees the princess. I don't know how it works on this world, but in the real world, we always heard about stories of princess, princes, witches and monsters. The good guys are the pretty ones, while the bad ones are the ugliest. Yes, it's a very biased way of seeing things, but hey, it's how kids are usually "taught" by these fairy tales.
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Loved it when it showed Yan's face : O
So pretty
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I love the atmosphere and realness of your art <3
It's so beautiful and full of colour and emotion ^-^
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The atmosphere is my favorite thing about this comic.
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Hey, I've been watching your art for a little while now, and though I haven't actually read your comic I must say that I love the way you tell it with pictures rather than panels, I would be honored if you would check out mine, (though I am using illustrations rather than pages with speech bubbles), but either way I feel that the image should be able to speak as much as the story, and yours do.
Stay safe, happy and keep the pictures coming!
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This is fantastic! I can almost smell the horse, the leather, the leaves, the water and the sun burning the skin so gently..... Excellent reflection and lighting/shadow play on the objects and characters.
Its like we are actually there. And it seems so real! I also like how you use the blurring of the background which enhances the focus of "actually being there" also as it improves the realism as it pretends there actually is a world around them.
Great work wlop!
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Your art is amazing and this story is the same, but I must say right now for me the most exciting thing is getting to know more about the Burning Rose
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Sorry, I dont mean to be an asshole, but I want to give you a little advice for comments: Try not to use "as always" when you praise someones work.
I don't know how wlop feels like about them, but I know quite a few artists that have mixed feelings about these exact words. They express that the commentor is taking the work of a person for granted, expects nothing less from them yes, but also doesn't take the road and process to a finished work into account, which can pose quite some hardship on the artist. When an artist is dissatisfied with their own work and someone tells them "..., as always.", it can be really disheartening and gives the impression that you as the audience aren't even looking closely at the art anymore because you don't expect anything new from them, dismissing not only the process of reaching a finalized word, but also dismissing any future improvements of the artist.
Artists often want to know how work they did makes you feel or what emotion they invoke in you. Try to tell them how you feel about their work, rather than what you expect their now and future work to be overall
Again, I don't mean to be a bitch about these words, but I always cringe when I see these words on an artwork
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(OoC: I mean no offence, but you can't be picky when you get feedback, regardless of how horrid, bland or rude it is..... Then again, hateful comments aren't really feedback, but that's beside the point)
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