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GhostBlade - Chapter 0 (Intro) : Heaven Eye
Published: 2014-01-25 15:02:06 +0000 UTC; Views: 170632; Favourites: 4249; Downloads: 2770
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After a long time preparing for the story and characters design, the first chapter of Ghostblade finally comes!I did it all in my limited spare time and I have to say that it's really not easy for me. Although it is still in my speed painting style, but when so many things get together, it became difficult... But your favourite and comment was great encouragement to me during this time! Thank you all!
Chapter 0 is mainly brief the background of the story, the main story will start in the next chapter: Ice princess! so come and get more familiar with some main characters in it! and tell me if you like it! I'll be glad to hear feedback from you!
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Thank you for your encouragement and advices!
Great thanks to for rewrite the story in such beautiful sentences for me!
Also thanks to for correcting some of the grammar mistakes!
Read GhostBlade on Tapastic: tapastic.com/episode/28730
>> Chapter 0 (Intro) : Heaven Eye Chapter 1 : Ice Princess Chapter 2 : Kidnapping (part I)
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Comments: 467
Those angels seem a bit fickle. Hundreds of years of learning and peace, and they go ape-shit over one human killing one angel?
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You are right, this is not reasonable, this question will be explained in later chapters~
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Great, i'm looking forwards to the next charpter
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gah! this is awesome! i can't wait for the next one!
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This is gorgeous!! Thanks for sharing!! i know the effort it takes to put something like this together!!
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nice to see an impressionistic style in this genre ...love it
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If you ever need help with English for your comic, feel free to note me. 
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this is goood! hope to see more of it
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what a beautiful and mind-blowing story.. i can't wait for continuation!
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This is really awesome! I love the story already~! I can't wait to read the next chapter C:
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Amazing story/artworks! Some of the grammar could use a bit of finishing though 
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Love it! I can't wait to see more!
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So captivating! The story is very well put together, the implementation of how the angels taught the human kind agriculture, metal blending, etc (wich comes from an apocryphal book) is here taken into a mesmerizing scenario!!! I WANT MOOOOOOOOOOOOORE xD
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This was great~i can't wait to see more~the art style was beautiful and the story was amazing~
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I can't wait to see more! I really like that sketchy style
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Excellent work! Its so wonderful to see more work from you! Every panel is amazing.
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this is looking to be Awesome keep it up. but not too much take care if your health too...
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Gosh, I've been waiting for this! I'm soooo excited! I can't wait till the first chapter's up!
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Omg. while the translation is a little off it seeems, I love the art and story!
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The art is beautiful, there's no doubt about that, but the writing is lacking. Hours must've gone into those images; why not take ten minutes to get the grammar right? It's nothing a quick rewrite wouldn't fix. Maybe English isn't your primary language? If so, I know your pain.
It's not the writing in itself, mostly, just the spelling and grammar. For example:
"Heros always born in chaos" should be "Heroes are always born in chaos".
"Human finally won the war" should be either "Humanity finally won the war" or "The humans finally won the war".
"Ostin led the 500 most powerful human warriors guard in the heaven tower" should be something akin to "Ostin let the five-hundred most powerful human warriors guard the heaven tower" or "Ostin led a guard of the five-hundred most powerful human warriors in the heaven tower".
"Human nearly extinct" should be "Humans were nearly extinct," "Humans nearly went extinct," or some other variation.
Those are the simpler mistakes. There are some that are more complex, like the "More and more brave human... ...one after another" sentence that should be broken up in three individual sentences to make sense.
I don't want to be mean about it, even if it seems like that. I'm an amateur writer, and I've had to learn all this the hard way. The other comments are nothing but praise, but with a few changes you could make this piece even better than it already is.
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Many thanks! I've correct the sentences that you mentioned! and I'll get some native speakers to help me next time...
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I have always been, and will continue to be, a huge fan of this style of your work. And the back story is absolutely enthralling. I am super excited for Chapter 1
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O my goodness! I love it, can't wait for the next chapter!
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..................................... I'm so hooked!!! !!!!!! MORE PLEASE, MOOOOORRRRREEEEEEE !!!!! I'll be waiting....
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Absolutely beautiful!! I love how you kept true to your speed style while managing to paint such an intricate story. The soft colors with vivid reds in the battle scenes made such an eye-catching contrast! I love the story, it seems very realistic for human nature. I can't wait to read more
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It looks very awesome and I can't wait to read more~!
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Woah, this is so nice! Making a whole comic page in painting style must have taken a long time, but you did great. This felt a little rush though, but it was only an introduction after all. Anyway this world setting looks really promising. I'm looking forward to see what story will taje place in it! (I guess this will be about the templars?)
There's one thing that bothered me though, and I'm sorry if that sounds unpleasant, but I think you need to know: your English contains a lot of mistakes whch make it a bit uneasy to read. I guess you're not a native speaker, I'm not blaming you for that of course, but maybe you should try to get someone to proof-read your pages before you upload them?
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yep, thank you! The story is originally in Chinese and I translate it when uploading here. I'll get some native speakers to help me next time~
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ah man this is beautiful!
I really really love the depth and colour in the steel making scene..
you've really inspired me to try to work more with colours and define my art less with hard lines
thank you ;A;
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