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wolfdancer — A Life Less Lovely
Published: 2002-11-21 22:38:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 133; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 22
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Without you and mea life less lovely.
The death of a star
is a night below par,
but killing that
which is we
is a life less lovely.
Winter without snow
is something
I wish to never know.
But hearing that
it's me you'd rather
not see
is a life less lovely.
An ice cold glare
from one I hold dear
is one of my great fears.
But not being able
to gaze in your eyes
as I stair my tea
is a life less lovely.
Witnessing the death
of a beautiful fae
would cause terrible dismay
but never knowing
who you'll ultimately be
is truly a life less lovely.
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Comments: 3
actually it's good.
you should have made seperate stanzas and whatnot.
also, in three parts of it the rhyme was forced... don't do that...
well then.
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Well done. Really nice. I'm also a poet so I can be critical if i wanted to be but there's nothing bad to say.
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once again the rhyming is to die for....i love the way it flows...great job
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