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wolfdancer — How Dare You
Published: 2002-11-20 23:15:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 113; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description How can you leave me
after such a short time?
How dare you just die
after our mood was so sublime?
How dare you leave me alone
cold, frightened and in despair.
Without you, it's getting harder
to breath in the cool night air
that used to fill my lungs with calm
but now kills my mind with alarm.
You are leaving me
that I cannot change.
But I can ignore it and
think of it as a dream with mange.
Where is that light coming from?
It's blinding but I see,
your soul has tears and is waving to me.
I'm speechless and just wave,
you're turning away so dignity will be saved.
You're gone now,
like the actor after his final bow.
And now it's my turn to cry.
Now because you left me
or that I'm now alone.
But because I have to ask why
I didn't tell you I love you
or even good bye
before you had to die.
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Comments: 2

ladynyk [2002-11-23 21:23:03 +0000 UTC]

*this* is good.. the rhyming is smooth, and not distracting at all (except perhaps "mange" that felt like you were reaching). The emotions are so vivid in this piece..

very well done!

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ilostmyname [2002-11-22 16:51:49 +0000 UTC]

you should definitely be getting more comments!!!! this is just amazing work!!!

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