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wolfdancer — Nightmares
Published: 2002-11-20 23:23:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 132; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description The nightmares haunt me
through night and day.
A thousand guards with dogs
can't keep them at bay.
Your beauty is a treasure
that I will forever keep.
But it is also a nightmare
that keeps me from sleep.
I fantasize our happiness
or what could have been
then I remember my misery
what shoudln't be, but already is.
I wish that you'd come back
and make this pain end.
But dreams and wishes are for rookies
and that's the bitter trend.
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Comments: 3

ladynyk [2002-11-23 21:20:10 +0000 UTC]

I like this.. and that says a lot since I'm not a huge fan of rhymes.. you are very good with using descriptive language to paint a wonderful picture of the story you are telling.

Nicely done.

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furryphotos [2002-11-22 03:06:40 +0000 UTC]

Heavy on the emotin there but i think the fifth line from the back is a bit add..

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rudepunkgurly [2002-11-20 23:42:51 +0000 UTC]

The feeling put into this poem is really strong.....once again nice rhyming...Super Poem

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