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Published: 2014-07-14 02:44:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 303288; Favourites: 2690; Downloads: 2507
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So I was working on this for my birthday (a little late). Once again I noticed I hadn't been doing many TG styled arts so I figured hey why not (also added in a teen age regression because my kinks yay)?Looks like I got a bottle of birthday vodka from La De Baucherie Magique (must be from Mistress Arianna or ).
This was also a bit inspired by 's dance club pieces, and originally the bottle was going to contain one of his Vodka Slime girls (something I'm so very hot for)
I'm not sure on quality here, for a quickie I didn't plot out first I think it's okay.
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Happy birthday, this one looked pretty fantastic.
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Love it! Great poses! Great facial expressions! Great sequencing! Outstanding work Wren!
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wow, this piece is super nice looking wren! Β great stuff! Β
Hope you had a sweet 16 LOL
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In my opinion, this is the best example of your "art puberty": A very well executed sequence. I love the poses, the expressions, the final outfit, the little panels in-between. They all contribute to making a sequence that's so much more than the sum of its parts. It might be a quickie, but (and this is a testament to your improvement) I'd say it's some of your best work!
I also noticed it used to have text that you removed. Good call and props to Mr-DNA for suggesting it!
My only complaint is that I now feel my part of our upcoming art trade will be less original 
Also, minor criticism: why is there a white space at the far left (between the edge of the image and the beginning of the zebra pattern)? Unless you're trying to emphasize the bottle's label I think the gap is slightly distracting.
Awesome work, keep it up!
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I was going for an assymmetrical balance to the piece so that the actual start of the transformation synched with the background graphic.Β
I'm sorry I made our trade deal bad, I have just been into the idea of this form of tg for awhile and my bday seemed like a good time to get it out. I actually don't drink much at all, can't stomach the stuff
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I know, I know. No need to apologize. Let the alcohol flow!
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A drink that makes the drinker unable to drink legally...you'd think that'd be a bit of a market killer?
Great TG! =3
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very cute end result, though you look a lil out of it there 
still a lil disconceting to see ya draw yourself with brown hair though XD
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It reads a little like they are standing on the white line at the bottom. I mention that because it makes it feel like some of the figures are floating, particularly figure 2.
Find the midpoint of their feet and line them up accordingly. See if that helps to ground them on the same plane. Or by adjusting the background, you eliminate that sense of grounding altogether.Β It depends what you're going for.
Not something that needs to be changed right now, but play around with it next time.
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I think I at least fixed person 2
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Yes, really. Would I lie to one of my favorite artists?
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Where do I score a bottle of that stuff?Β
This is definitely one of the better sequences you've done. I like the little insights into the character's changing thoughts. Β
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Your Avatar horrifies me...
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Well it is from a horror movie...Β
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SHOTS!
S - H - O - T - S!
SHOTS!
If I may critique, though, the floating words are unnecessary. The poses and expression already completely sold it, and you don't want a show-don't-tell violation when you're already drunk, do ya?
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True, easy fix (fixed now)
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Thanks boss! Hope to keep up the outputs!
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Can't wait to see what's next in the lineup!
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Daaaaamn! This is amazing Wren! Like... your art style improved 10-fold! You're getting even better! Keep up the great work! Heh maybe it's good things took so long if this is the new level of quality. ^^
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*kicks door open* Who's ready to get riggedy-riggedy-wrecked SOOOOOON!!!! *sets music player to Shake That Ass Bitch*
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I wouldn't mind drinking that bottle!
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Wow reminds me of something in my life lol. Awesome pic and careful of the booze man.
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its weird seeing your avatar with out white hair, I like it, I was just am use to the white
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