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Published: 2006-12-04 22:35:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 86; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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I lovedAs the brook babbles to me softly
I feel a sense of loss
I feel a sense of pain
Comfort from this simple stream
Flashes, soft, dark
Eternal viridian
Colors fading
Eternal fades
Vows are broken
The brook flows as I babble
Uncaring to my monologue
I confess myself
I lay myself bare
Before the loud
And babbling brook
The trees grow silent
The wind dies down
The sun descends to rest
The moon comes to tuck it to sleep
I do not cease my confession
My soul, pouring into this brook
Shadows, darkness, silence
The brook ignores my plight
The lantern bugs come out to play
One last frolic before the world turns white
My world has died
It may come back
Like the winter surrenders
But my tears will flow
Like that silent stream
That will be not eternal
That will not fade
Eternal fades
My loss will not
My love will not
That is forever
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Comments: 2
Wubanget [2006-12-07 01:16:42 +0000 UTC]
I think this poem is my personal favorite that i've done so far... I did it really quick too... I crank out alot of poems in a couple seconds and tweak them later... I have a whole pile i have to go through...
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