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Published: 2005-03-09 03:33:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1689; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 138
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rivers flowing downpain seeps out from above
happiness hides what it can
living without your love
One I let go of
and one I pushed away
now I see nothing
losing my soul I pray
being taken over by nothing
take me from this shame
away to another place
feeding on misplaced blame
Blue rivers turn red
trails flow down my flesh
pushing down for relief
putting life to the test
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ho sorry!!^^
But your poem it's very good too! you don't want translate it in french?
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Will you translate it for me?
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ok, i will try to make a correct translation(my english is not very good!^^)(leave me some days please^^!)
please visit my gallery ^^
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ok, i will try to make a correct translation(my english is not very good!^^)(leave me some days please^^!)
please visit my gallery ^^
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Wow, Mommy. I didn't know you wrote poems. I love this! It's amazing. Great job mommy. And if you feel that way, ever, hehe come and talk to me...
:trishay:
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ya, baby. I'm so 
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Aww, don't feel lonely. 
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I feel
What you feel
I will kneel
Before your feel
I'm near
To your feel
I can hear
Your Hopeless scream
I scream too
Just for you
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very nice, i feel the emotion its really good, your work is good you should do more of it, and the ending is the best in my point of view, keep up the wickedly shibby work
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Thanks, Ya I have been wanting to do more work. But with starting a new job and then being pregnant and tired all the time, I can't seem to find the time to do anything. This just poured out of me last night along with my tears. I had no choice.
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oh ok, well when ever u can do something so it, i don't want u to do it cuz i asked ok, and what ya having a Boy or Girl
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Thats so sad... yet it is also so beautifully written. An excellent poem!
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The painting is from another artist actually. His name is Mark Ryden. His name is actually in the picture. Its a image directly off his website. I didn't want people to be confused as to who did the image. Nice poem though.
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Thanks for the clear up. Yes isn't his work awesome.
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this pic is very well done, and so somber. but i like it alot. and yeah, love can be a bitch . . . but it's pretty awesome when it all works out . . .
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*sighs* ya, I'm just waiting for my love to return.
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Wow, I really love this. It's really gothic. Very nice job. Kind of reminds me of Samara, from The Ring. Maybe it's just the mirror. Anyway, lovely! ^_^
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Damn ! im happy not to know this girl cuz i would probably be sad with her
The emotion on this pic is incredible !
--Charles--
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Thanks I think!
I did not do the picture, but it went along so well with how I felt. I thought I would use it.
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