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1/4 For Burntpaw to become BurntFrost.The Story So Far:
Burntpaw lay rested in the apprentices' den. His chest rose and fell as he began to enter a dream. The tom arose in a dark place. The stars were below his feet. What was he seeing? Was this a sign from Starclan? "Hello?" Burntpaw managed to speak. No sound. Quickly he repeated again,"Hello?" Then adding,"Anyone there?" Frustration then ached the tom's whiskers, and then he flicked his tail angrily. This is a dream, why can't I hear anyone? Quickly after what seemt like moons, a silver-speckled she-cat jumped in the distance. Burntpaw squinted his eyes and cringe as he heard water splash. "What the--" Strangely enough, another cat, this time a young black tom bounded over to where the she-cat jumped, and soonly jumped over as well. Burntpaw raced to saved the tom. "Burntpaw." He spun around. "Burntpaw!" There it was again. Burntpaw swished his head rapidly to find who was calling him. He glanced at the floor. The stars were no longer there. Thedark apprentice gave the ground a curious look," Burntpaw!" He ignored it. What's this? The ground seemed to have risen and Burntpaw could no longer see his feet. Was he being swallowed up? "Help!" Burntpaw yowled. then ground had eaten him. "Burntpaw!I shouldn't have to tell you this many times to wake up!" He heard Dustfang yell over him. Burntpaw felt his body swell with relief now that he was back in Willowclan. He glanced up at his mentor, slightly cringing at his angry face. "Sorry." Burntpaw muttered." What do you want?"
"We're going hunting. Hollowpaw, swiftstep and Petalpaw will b accompanying us." Dustfang answered. "Get up, we have to go, kits and queens are hungry--"
"We're low on stock." Burntpaw interrupted him coldly. "I'm coming."
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Burntpaw crouched in the snow, keeping his body close to the ground as he approached the oblivious mouse as it scavenged for food. As the black tom neared the mouse's tiny ears perked up. Burntpaw took his shot and dove at the mouse, paws extended and claws unsheathed. He caught the tiny creature between his paws and quickly reached down at bit its neck, killing it instantly. He stood, the rodents limp body hanging from his jaws.
Dustfang approached from where he had stayed down wind behind some underbrush. "Good job, Burntpaw," He purred. Burntpaw said nothing at his mentor's approval and buried his prey beside a tree to retrieve it later. "Let's see if we can catch a few more things before we head home." Dustfang flicked his tail and led the way into the forest. Burntpaw nodded and followed closely behind his leader.
Soonly, the two neared Streamclan border. The stream rippled wildly. Burnpaw stared at it, reminding him of the dream. Who were those two cats? Burntpaw was eager to know. Determination shone in his eyes. He tried to imagine the silver-she-cat's pelt. She looked just like. stargazer! Burntpaw hadn't seen her in what seemed like moons! He turned to look at Dustfang. "Dustfang, have you seen Stargazer around lately?" Burntpaw questioned.
"She has disappeared--"
"What?" Burntpaw didn't want to believe this.
Dustfang turned his gazed to his apprentice, curiosity clearly in his eyes. "Why are you so interested, Burntpaw?"
"It's nothing." Burntpaw couldn't reveal their secret. Dustfang switched his head to the front again, before adding," Let's not waste time then."
Burntpaw nodded blankly.
Stargazer, where have you gone?
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Comments: 2
CloverPawIsHere [2012-12-11 03:49:14 +0000 UTC]
Whoa. o.o
I love the drawing, and the story is really interesting.
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SophSouffle [2012-11-29 00:58:40 +0000 UTC]
I love the way this looks! Especially Dustang ;3;
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