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zapperzoid2000 — Introspectre
Published: 2005-07-26 04:14:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 62; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Hearts of steel, hearts of fire,help me through this dank dark mire.
i see no passage through this blight and decay
i live in hatred of the coming day
I keep to myself, in solitude
i try to quell this attitude
of hopelessness
of loneliness
of despair
of life without a care.
i dont want to like this
a soul that no one would kiss
i wish i could change
i wish i wasnt so strange
I wish i could cry some nights
when i feel death inside
But i keep it all within
no one needs to share my burden
and i wear a mask
so no one feels the need to ask
how i really feel inside.
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Comments: 2
yes...agree with^ you do have the rhyme....but T.S. Elliot would be great for you to read.
good job
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You have quite the potential to become a better poet. You've got the rhythm, just read other poetry such as T.S Elliot and such to better yourself, to be able to express your opinions better, etc.
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